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Band 4+: The Maps below show a beachfront area in Australia between 1950 and today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image contains two sketches of a beach area, labeled as "1950" and "Now." In the first sketch, from the left, a city is connected to a car park with a play area and dining tables next to it, further right is a pavilion between two 25m pools facing the beach, and a lighthouse is situated on the far right. The second sketch, labeled "Now," shows a city connected to a car park with dining tables next to it, to the right is a pavilion, followed by a 50m pool above the beach with a restaurant and surf club next to it, and a lighthouse on the far right. The road in the second sketch curves around the pool, beach, and lighthouse.

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The map illustrate changes in beachfront area in Australia in 1950 until today.

Overall, the area has become urbanized, with the addition of completley new sports complexes and entertainment factilities.

In detail, in 1950, the road wich connected city with parking area has been extendet along light house. Pavilion was situated on the north side of the map, close to car parking wich was curved, compared to the past. Near the pavilion, dinning tables was provided for visitors. Huge play ground area was replaced by parking area, while the second parking space has been modified. It worth to mention about new buildings on the west side of the map like restaurant and surf club. I decide to remove the swimming pool from the map, because it do not worth my attention

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task but includes some irrelevant and inaccurate information. The writing is not always clear, and there are grammatical errors. The selection of key features is inconsistent, and the report lacks a systematic comparison between the two time periods. To improve, focus on accurately describing the changes, organizing the information logically, and using precise language. Also, avoid personal opinions or justifications for omitting information. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates some attempt at organization, but the flow of information is not always logical. The connections between sentences and ideas could be strengthened to improve coherence. Paragraphing is present but could be used more effectively to group related information. For example, the description of the changes to the car park and the addition of new buildings could be separated into distinct paragraphs.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is somewhat limited and lacks precision. There are instances of inappropriate word choice ('completley,' 'factilities,' 'wich,' 'extendet,' 'dinning'). Expanding your vocabulary and using more specific terms would enhance the report. For example, instead of 'huge play ground area,' you could use 'extensive playground' or 'large recreational area.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses ('illustrate' instead of 'illustrates,' 'has been extendet' instead of 'has been extended'), incorrect word forms ('dinning' instead of 'dining'), and subject-verb agreement issues. Sentence structure is also often awkward and unclear. Focus on improving your understanding and application of basic grammar rules and sentence construction.

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