Band 6+: Why do people like to walk in parks?

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The response addresses the question directly and provides a clear reason for why people enjoy walking in parks. Expanding on the benefits of a quiet atmosphere or providing additional reasons could further enhance the answer.

The response is somewhat coherent, but there are noticeable pauses and hesitations. The ideas are presented, but the flow could be smoother. Try to avoid repeating phrases like 'in parks' and use synonyms or pronouns to maintain a better flow. Practice speaking more continuously without long pauses.

The vocabulary is simple and adequate for conveying the main idea, but it lacks variety and precision. The word choice is basic. To improve, try to incorporate more descriptive words and phrases related to the atmosphere and benefits of walking in parks. For example, instead of 'quiet atmosphere,' you could say 'serene environment' or 'tranquil setting.'

There are several grammatical errors, such as 'most of people' instead of 'most people,' and awkward phrasing like 'in parks, nobody.' The sentence structure is also quite simple. To improve, focus on using correct articles, plural forms, and more varied sentence structures. Practice constructing complex sentences to express your ideas more effectively.