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Band 4+: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the population change between 1940 and 2000 in three different counties in the U.S. state of Oregon. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words

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Image for topic: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the population change between 1940 and 2000 in three different counties in the U.S. state of Oregon. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words

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The image displays a line graph illustrating population changes from 1940 to 2000 in thousands for three Oregon counties: Columbia, Yamhill, and Washington. In 1940, Columbia had a population of 20, Yamhill had 30, and Washington had 75. By 1970, Columbia's population rose to 25, Yamhill's to 40, and Washington's to 120. In 2000, Columbia reached a population of 50, Yamhill 75, and Washington 240.

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The line graph illustrates the population change in the state of Oregon by three different countries from 1940 to 2000. Overall, the trend was significantly increased. The highest population was from Washington while the smallest was Colombia.

In 1940, the population from Columbia and Yamhill were approximately 30.000 people each. Meanwhile, population from Washington was around 75.000 people. In 1970, the population of Colombia was upward in around 31.000, whereas Yamhill touch in 45.000. In contrast, the number of people from Washington was over 120.000, continous in 240.000 people in 2000.

In general, the population in the state of Oregon was dominated by Washington people.

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population: 6

people: 5

washington: 4

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The report identifies the main trends and provides some relevant data, but there are inaccuracies and omissions. The writing is not always clear, and the organization could be improved. To improve, focus on providing more accurate data and structuring the report with a clearer overview, body paragraphs detailing specific trends, and a concise conclusion. Also, ensure that the language used is precise and avoids generalizations. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report presents a basic overview of the data but lacks a clear structure and logical flow. The information is not always presented in a cohesive manner, making it difficult to follow the trends and comparisons effectively. Consider organizing the report into paragraphs that focus on specific time periods or counties to improve clarity. Use transition words to connect ideas and ensure a smoother flow between sentences.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is simple and somewhat repetitive. There is limited use of more sophisticated language to describe the trends and changes in population. Incorporate a wider range of vocabulary related to population growth, such as 'increased steadily,' 'fluctuated,' or 'remained stable,' to provide a more detailed and nuanced description. Also, avoid direct copying of words from the task prompt.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward phrasing. These errors affect the clarity and accuracy of the information presented. Focus on improving your understanding of basic grammar rules and sentence structure. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors before submitting your work.

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