Part 3

Band 6+: what can today's children do to become famous

See all user-submitted answers on this topic

Skyrocket your IELTS band score by 1-2 points in under a month with our premium plan!

Note: Both the topic and the answer were submitted by one of our users.

75% Accuracy The overall pronunciation accuracy of your speech, reflecting how well a native speaker can comprehend it.

Polished transcript:

Male Female

In my perspective, there are several ways of becoming famous. One of the main ones is working on social media, like having their own interesting videos or small reels to become famous, or creating positive content on YouTube channels. It's the best way to become famous, or, let's say, to advertise some products or brands, which can also help them become popular.

Actual audio transcript (What native speakers are likely to hear):

In my perspective there are several ways of becoming famous. One of the main one is working on social media, like having their own, let’s say, some interesting videos or interesting small reels to become famous or making some kind of positive or like like positive is on YouTube channels it’s the best way to become famous or let’s say or advertise some kind of guts some products of brand makes them to become popular as well

Tips: Click on each word to see feedback.

Speaking Time: 25 seconds

Check Your Own Answer On This Topic?

Check My Answer

Generate A Band-9 Sample With Your Idea?

Generate A Sample

Overall Band Score

6.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
Strive to incorporate even richer and more precise language.

Vocabulary Repetition:

famous: 3

become: 3

Try using synonyms for the above words

Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

Task Response

The response addresses the question directly and provides relevant ideas. To improve, consider expanding on the ideas with more detailed explanations or examples. Also, explore a wider range of possibilities beyond social media.

Fluency & Coherence

The response is generally understandable, but there are noticeable hesitations ('let's say,' 'or like like') and some repetition that affect the flow. The ideas are presented, but the coherence could be improved with better connectors and transitions between points. Try to minimize filler words and pauses by practicing speaking more smoothly and connecting your ideas more logically.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, but it lacks precision and variety. The language used is quite basic ('interesting videos,' 'small reels,' 'positive content'). To improve, try to incorporate more specific and varied vocabulary related to social media and fame. For example, instead of 'interesting videos,' you could say 'engaging content' or 'viral videos.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammar is mostly accurate, but there are some errors and awkward phrasing ('making some kind of positive or like like positive is on YouTube channels'). The range of structures is limited. Focus on using a wider range of grammatical structures and ensuring accuracy in your sentence constructions. Pay attention to correct word order and avoid unnecessary repetition.

Answers On The Same Topic:

what can today’s children do to become famous

At present, children can become females quite easily, since nowadays have so much opportunity to become a female child. For instance, nowadays more children share their videos or meeting talents in the apps like YouTube or TikTok or Instagram. So, children can become a female shareholder, such as singing, dancing, or maybe jamming. So, absolutely, […]

Band 7+

See All

How do you think rapid technological advancements influence our understanding of privacy and security?

I believe that people do not read toxic conditions before using technology because it is more famous on social media and among the youngsters so they trust them blindly and install apps, upload their personal pictures, their chats with someone. For example, recently WhatsApp told that their chats are not safe anymore, they can reach […]

Band 6+

What role do you believe social media platforms play in shaping public opinion about scientific discoveries?

In my opinion social media plays a really big big role on scientific issues and just in all issues that internet may know because virus videos can be easily shared by someone on different topics such as science or other and it may be fake and people may identify as the real facts and make […]

Band 6+

What role, if any, should governments play in regulating artistic expression?

Government plays a crucial role in promoting artistic expression because they have all the authorities to promote this kind of things. By this visitors will also get to know what is happening in the country.

Band 6+

2. How can art activities support children's development and learning?

For children, art activities are so useful because when they are learning something related to drawing, their ability would be to tend to learn other skills also. And by this way they can improve and they can develop their mindsets by drawing and also kind of art activities. In addition, they can think that they […]

Band 6+

What are the potential long-term consequences of the growing popularity of personalized medicine?

As the world is developing so fast and people have their own need and one need is personalized medicine and genetic testing which might be beneficial for some people but in long time there might be a few consequences as the popularity is growing really. In some cases, celebrities use personalized medicine and some other […]

Band 6+

How do you think the increasing use of social media affects people's attention spans?

Yes, I definitely think that the increase of social networks has negatively affected two people’s attention. Nowadays, most people, especially young generation, became more addicted on social media and they instead of focusing on the topic instead of doing their home tasks given by teachers, they prefer resting their time on social media and just […]

Band 6+

See All

Check Your Own Answer On This Topic?

Generate A Band-9 Sample With Your Idea?

Overall Band Score

Pronunciation

Task Response

Fluency & Coherence

Lexical Resource

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Answers On The Same Topic:

Other Topics:

Plans & Pricing

Free

Premium