Band 6+: How do you think the increasing use of social media affects people's attention spans?

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

The response addresses the question but could benefit from a more developed explanation. Consider providing a broader perspective beyond just the younger generation and academic tasks. Adding specific examples or discussing the underlying mechanisms of how social media affects attention spans could strengthen the answer.

The response is generally coherent, but there are some hesitations and a bit of rambling. To improve, try to structure your answer more clearly, perhaps by outlining the main points you want to make before you start speaking. Using signposting language (e.g., 'Firstly,' 'Secondly,' 'In conclusion') can also help to guide the listener and improve coherence.

The vocabulary is adequate but could be more precise and varied. The word 'resting' is not used correctly in the context. To improve, try to use synonyms and more specific vocabulary related to the topic of attention spans and social media. For example, instead of 'wasting their time,' you could say 'procrastinating' or 'engaging in unproductive activities.'

There are several grammatical errors in the response, including incorrect verb tenses ('became' instead of 'have become'), incorrect preposition use ('on social media' is correct, but the surrounding sentence structure is awkward), and subject-verb agreement issues. To improve, focus on using correct verb tenses and sentence structures. Practice speaking about familiar topics and pay attention to your grammar as you speak.