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Band 5+: The maps below show the changes in an Art Centre from 2010 to today.

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The image depicts two layouts labeled as "2010" and "Today"; in 2010, sections included an "Open air car park," "Theatre 200 seats," "Cinema," "Cafe," and "Art Galleries"; in the "Today" layout, sections are updated to "Multipurpose car park," "Theatre 300 seats," "Art Gallery," "Cinema screens 1, 2, 3," and "Cafe."

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The maps illustrate how the Art Centre has changed from 2010 to present. Overall, the structure has been developed and the cinema area divided into 3 parts.

Overall, the area has undergone significant development, with cinema and locations of cafe and art gallery.

In 2010, in front side of the map located some facilities such as open air car park, at the bottom of the parking area situated theatre for 200 customers and next to the the theatre placed cinema. At the west – lower part posittioneted cafe, while in the facing area situated Art Gallerries.

Today, the car park changes it’s characteristics from open air to multipurpose. The theatre added number of seats about 100 and at the results it contains 300 seats now. The positions of the cinema and Art Gallery switched places. In comparison, the cinema magnified it’s area and it was becoming more bigger than past. The cafe increased in lenght, therefore decreased by wide.

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cinema: 5

theatre: 3

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Task Response

The report adequately addresses the task by describing the changes to the Art Centre layout. The description is generally clear, but there are some areas where the language could be more precise and the organization could be improved. To enhance the report, focus on providing more specific details and using more accurate language to describe the changes. Also, ensure a clearer structure with well-defined paragraphs.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks clear organization and transitions between ideas. The 'Overall' statements are repetitive and don't effectively summarize the changes. Paragraphing is present but doesn't always group related information logically. To improve coherence, use more varied transition words and phrases to guide the reader through the changes. For example, use phrases like 'In contrast,' 'Subsequently,' or 'Furthermore' to connect ideas more smoothly. Also, ensure each paragraph focuses on a specific aspect of the changes, avoiding repetition.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is somewhat limited and lacks precision. There are instances of awkward phrasing, such as 'posittioneted' and 'magnified it's area and it was becoming more bigger than past.' To enhance lexical resource, try to use more specific and varied vocabulary to describe the changes. For example, instead of 'changes it's characteristics,' you could say 'was converted' or 'was transformed.' Use a thesaurus to find synonyms and expand your vocabulary related to maps and spatial changes.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Examples include incorrect verb tenses ('car park changes'), subject-verb agreement issues ('Art Gallerries'), and awkward sentence structures ('The cafe increased in lenght, therefore decreased by wide'). To improve grammatical range and accuracy, focus on using a variety of sentence structures correctly. Pay attention to verb tenses, subject-verb agreement, and the correct use of articles and prepositions. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors.

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