Band 7+: why did you choose this field?

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

The response directly addresses the question and provides clear reasons for choosing the field. The answer includes personal experiences to support the choice, making it relatable and engaging. To further enhance the response, consider adding more specific details about the field itself or expanding on the impact doctors have on society.

The answer is generally coherent, but there are some minor hesitations and a slight lack of smoothness. The use of 'also because' feels a bit repetitive. To improve, try to vary your sentence structures and use more sophisticated linking words to connect your ideas more seamlessly. For example, instead of 'also because,' you could say 'furthermore' or 'in addition to this.'

The vocabulary is adequate and relevant to the topic, but it could be more precise and varied. The phrase 'angels of mercy' is a good touch. To enhance your lexical resource, try to incorporate more specific and nuanced vocabulary related to the medical field and your interest in it. For example, instead of just saying 'cure humans,' you could talk about 'treating diseases' or 'alleviating suffering.'

There are a few grammatical errors, such as 'the reason I chose this field because' (should be 'is that' or 'is because I'). Also, 'doctors is the only one' should be 'doctors are the only ones.' While these errors don't significantly impede understanding, correcting them would improve your score. Focus on subject-verb agreement and correct use of 'because' in sentence structure.