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Band 7+: Do you think parents should supervise their children's use of the Internet?

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Absolutely 100%. I do believe that the internet is not a safe place and it can be very dangerous for kids. The constant exposure to the internet can actually affect the way kids' minds work and even create new bad habits. To avoid these trade-offs, parents should keep an eye on their children and minimize their screen time. In addition, they should set up some parental controls on programs like YouTube. For example, you can go to the settings and easily set up and activate the parental controls, ensuring that your kids will not come across any weird or inappropriate videos.

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Absolutely 100%. I do believe that the internet is not a safe place and it very takes place actually for kids and the constant exposure of internet can actually can actually affect the way kids minds work and even can affect to create you know new bad habits. So in order to avoid all these trade-offs we The parents should keep an eye on their children and they have to minimize their screen time in addition to, you know, putting or setting up some parental controls on some programs like YouTube, for example, you can go to the settings and easily set up and activate the parental controls and thus you will, your kids will not come across any weird videos and inappropriate videos.

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Vocabulary Repetition:

internet: 2

should: 2

their: 2

parental: 2

controls: 2

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Task Response

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The vocabulary is adequate but could be more precise. The phrase 'trade-offs' is not entirely appropriate in this context; consider using 'risks' or 'negative consequences' instead. Try to incorporate a wider range of vocabulary related to internet safety and child development to demonstrate a more flexible use of language.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are a few grammatical errors, such as 'it very takes place actually for kids' and 'affect to create'. While these errors don't significantly impede understanding, correcting them would improve the overall impression. Focus on using a wider range of grammatical structures accurately. For example, you could use more complex sentence structures to express your ideas more precisely.

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