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Band 5+: How might the increasing reliance on automation impact the nature of employment in the next decade?

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The increase in automation will impact the job market for young people. The impact is very concerning because today's job market is slow worldwide. First off, the job impact affects everyone. This is a critical time for all jobs. For young people, the next decision is about your business, and you may not have a job because the market is not favorable. You own your business and decide to pursue a big venture, not just a job, because jobs are temporary; they may be available for six months and then not available for another six months. The situation in Dubai and Iran also impacts all jobs.

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The increase in automatic impact on the job market for young people. The impact is very bad because today’s job market is very slow in all the world. First off, job impact in all people. So this is very critical time in all jobs. So, the young people, the next decision is on your business and you don’t have a job because your market is not a good market. You own your business and you decide a big business and not like a job because job is is temporary, in six months is available and six months is not available. Two days is Dubai and Iran, Iran war and impact all jobs.

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