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Band 7+: Describe a person in the medical field that you would like to work with

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I would like to work with a hard-working college doctor. I first heard about him through a documentary on social media. What impressed me most wasn't only his medical knowledge but also the way he treated his patients with kindness and patience. He seems extremely disciplined and hardworking because he often works long hours to save people's lives. I would love to work with him because I think I could learn a lot from his experience and professionalism. In addition, he inspires young people to study medicine and health safety. I believe working with such a person would make me more responsible and ambitious in my own career.

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I would like to work with a hard-sorging college doctor. I did a first heard about him through a documentary on social media. What impressed me most wasn’t only his medical knowledge but also the way he treated his patients with kindness and patience. He seems extremely disciplined and hardworking because he often works long hours to save people’s life. I would love to work with him because I think I could learn a lot from his experience and professionalism. In addition, he inspires young people to study medicine and health safety. I believe working with such a person would make me to become more responsible and ambitious in my own career.

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Pronunciation

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Task Response

The response is relevant and provides a clear description of a person in the medical field. The candidate explains why they would like to work with this person, highlighting their qualities and the potential for learning and inspiration. To improve, the candidate could include more specific details about the doctor's work or the documentary they watched. Adding a personal anecdote or a more concrete example of the doctor's impact would also strengthen the response. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

Fluency & Coherence

The response is generally coherent and easy to follow. The ideas are presented in a logical order, describing how the speaker learned about the doctor and why they admire him. However, there are a few pauses and minor hesitations that slightly affect the fluency. To improve, practice speaking more continuously on a variety of topics to reduce hesitations.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate and appropriate for the topic. Words like 'disciplined,' 'hardworking,' 'professionalism,' and 'ambitious' are well-chosen. However, the range could be expanded to demonstrate greater flexibility. Try to incorporate more specific and nuanced vocabulary related to the medical field or personal qualities.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammar is mostly accurate with a good range of structures. There's a minor error ('make me to become') which should be corrected to 'make me become.' Overall, the grammatical control is strong. Continue to focus on accuracy, especially with more complex sentence structures.

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Band 7+: Describe a person in the medical field that you would like to work with

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