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Band 7+: Do you think it's a good idea to let animals stay in local parks for people to see?

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I don't consider captivity to be a good idea because when animals are frequently exposed to human interactions, they tend to develop mental issues such as isolation and repression. For instance, in Jeju, animals may be subjected to human activities that foster a dangerous setup and put them on high alert. Therefore, long-term exposure will have negative effects on animals.

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I don’t consider capitivity to be such a good idea, because when animals are frequently expelled to human interactions, they tend to develop mental issues such as isolation to end repression. For instance, gays, animals, in Jeju, you may be subjected to human activities which foster a setup danger and put them in high guard. Therefore, long-term compatibility will have negative effects on animals.

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human: 2

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Task Response

The response addresses the question directly and provides a clear opinion with supporting reasons. The example provided strengthens the argument. To further enhance the response, consider exploring alternative perspectives or acknowledging potential benefits of animals in local parks before reinforcing your stance.

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The answer is generally coherent, presenting a clear stance against captivity. However, there are some minor hesitations and awkward phrasing that slightly disrupt the flow. To improve, focus on smoother transitions between ideas and practice speaking more naturally on the topic.

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The vocabulary is adequate for expressing the main points, with words like 'captivity,' 'isolation,' and 'repression' being used appropriately. However, the range could be expanded with more precise and nuanced vocabulary related to animal welfare and the impact of human interaction. Consider using synonyms and more descriptive language to enhance the answer.

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The answer demonstrates a reasonable command of grammar, but there are some errors that affect clarity. For example, 'expelled to human interactions' could be phrased more accurately as 'exposed to human interactions.' Also, 'foster a setup danger' is grammatically awkward. Focus on refining sentence structure and ensuring accurate word choice to improve grammatical accuracy.

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