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Band 5+: What role should governments play in promoting healthy lifestyles among their citizens?

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I guess that governments should play a role in promoting healthy lifestyles, for instance, just because they want to. It is possible they play a role; however, they aren't. You have to heal the lifestyles. Most people would like to heal their lifestyles, but they don't. Schools should promote sports like football and healthy eating nearly every day throughout the year.

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I guess that clients shouldn’t play a role in promoting music, for instance, just because they want to. possible they play a role, however they aren’t. You have heal the lifestyles. The most people heal the lifestyles would like. They don’t. school, play football and trading a big everyday. In addition, they have huge food eating, always nearly everyday during the year.

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lifestyles: 3

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