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Band 6+: The line graph below shows the average monthly temperatures in three major cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image displays a line graph depicting the average monthly temperatures in Celsius for three major cities: Paris, Dubai, and Sydney. In January, Paris is at 5°C, Dubai at 19°C, and Sydney at 23°C; in February, Paris at 7°C, Dubai 20°C, Sydney 23°C; in March, Paris 10°C, Dubai 23°C, Sydney 22°C; in April, Paris 14°C, Dubai 26°C, Sydney 20°C; in May, Paris 18°C, Dubai 30°C, Sydney 17°C; in June, Paris 21°C, Dubai 33°C, Sydney 14°C; in July, Paris 24°C, Dubai 35°C, Sydney 13°C; in August, Paris 24°C, Dubai 36°C, Sydney 14°C; in September, Paris 21°C, Dubai 33°C, Sydney 17°C; in October, Paris 16°C, Dubai 29°C, Sydney 19°C; in November, Paris 10°C, Dubai 25°C, Sydney 21°C; and in December, Paris 6°C, Dubai 21°C, Sydney 22°C.

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The line graph compares changes in the average monthly temperatures in Paris, Boston, and Melbourne.

Overall, while the hot weather can be seen in winter in Melbourne, an opposite pattern is observed in both Paris and Boston. Additionally, the highest temperature is witnessed in Boston, whereas the lowest one is in Melbourne.

Regarding Melbourne, the figure stands at just over 25 in January and decreases steadily to approximately 15 by July. In contrast, from July to December, there is a gradual rise in the temperature, finishing at nearly 25 at the outset of the period. As regards Paris, the figure escalates from roughly 7 to about 25 between January and July. It remains constant by August and then declines dramatically to nearly 8 at the conclusion of the timeframe.

As for Boston, the indicator shows just under 5 at the beginning of the period. By June, there is a significant increase, at roughly 27. Similarly, the figure goes up by August, reaching a peak of approximately 32. Conversely, there is then a sharp reduction, finishing at 5 in December.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

boston: 4

paris: 3

figure: 3

there: 3

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Task Response

The report fails to accurately identify the cities presented in the visual description, substituting Paris, Dubai, and Sydney with Paris, Boston, and Melbourne. This significant inaccuracy in the data subjects affects the overall task achievement. While the report follows a logical structure and attempts to describe trends and make comparisons, the misidentification of the cities means the response does not correctly summarize the provided information. To improve, ensure that all labels and categories from the graph are transcribed accurately before beginning the analysis.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is logically organized with a clear introduction, overview, and body paragraphs. The use of cohesive devices such as 'Overall', 'Regarding', 'In contrast', and 'As for' helps guide the reader through the comparisons. However, the progression could be improved by ensuring that the transitions between cities feel more integrated rather than just a list of descriptions. To reach a higher band, try to weave more direct comparisons between the cities within the body paragraphs rather than describing each city in isolation.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate and varied, with good use of verbs to describe trends (e.g., 'escalates', 'declines dramatically', 'reaches a peak'). There is a good attempt at using synonyms for temperature and data (e.g., 'the figure', 'the indicator'). To improve, aim for more sophisticated collocations and avoid repetitive phrasing like 'the figure stands at'. Additionally, ensure that the terminology used is precise for the context of temperature (e.g., using 'degrees' or 'Celsius' to provide clarity).

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a good range of grammatical structures, including complex sentences and various tense usages. Most sentences are error-free and convey meaning clearly. There are minor issues with article usage and phrasing that slightly affect the natural flow. To improve, focus on refining sentence structures to increase complexity and ensuring that prepositions used with numerical data (e.g., 'at', 'to', 'by') are used with absolute precision.

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