Bar Chart

Band 5+: The chart below shows information about calorie consumption in seven countries in 1975 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

See all user-written answers on this topic

Image for topic: The chart below shows information about calorie consumption in seven countries in 1975 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

Our system will evaluate the answer based on this AI-generated description.

The image displays calorie consumption data for seven countries in 1975 and 2000. China: 1975 (2000 kcal), 2000 (3000 kcal); Brazil: 1975 (2500 kcal), 2000 (3000 kcal); Indonesia: 1975 (2100 kcal), 2000 (2500 kcal); Nigeria: 1975 (2000 kcal), 2000 (2000 kcal); Pakistan: 1975 (2200 kcal), 2000 (2500 kcal); India: 1975 (2200 kcal), 2000 (2400 kcal); Bangladesh: 1975 (1900 kcal), 2000 (2000 kcal).

Given the complexity of the image, the above description may not be entirely accurate.

Skyrocket your IELTS band score by 1-2 points in under a month with our premium plan!

Check it out

Note: Both the topic and the answer were created by one of our users.

The bar chart illustrates the number of intake calories in seven different countries between 1975 and 2000.

Overall, all four countries: China, Brazil, Nigeria and Indonesia presented the largest numbers which are more than 2500, whereas others countries: Pakistan, India and Bangladesh were experiencing lower figures by the final year. It is noteworthy that all counties rose only without any drop.

To commence with China, it used 2000 calories in 1975 and increased sharply to 3000 by 2000, which became the biggest calories consumed country. The second largest figures accords to Brazil which increased from 2500 to 2900. Followed by, Indonesia and Nigeria consumed large amount of calories, which were increased from 200 to 2800 and 2100 to 2700, respectively.

In contrast Pakistan and Bangladesh experienced the least rose from 2300 to 2500 and 1900 to 2100, overall. Despite India increased sharply from 1900 to 2900, it remained with smaller figures compared with other five countries.

Word Count: 156

Check Your Answer On This Topic?

Check My Answer

Generate A Band-9 Sample Answer?

Generate A Sample

Overall Band Score

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
Opt for even more advanced words when appropriate.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

calories: 4

which: 4

increased: 4

figures: 3

Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

The report attempts to address the task and identifies some trends, but there are significant issues with data accuracy and logical consistency. While the instructions advise leniency regarding the AI-generated description, the report contains internal contradictions - for example, stating that all countries rose, but then providing figures that do not align with the provided data or the logic of the comparison. There are also several inaccuracies in the reported numbers (e.g., mentioning 200 calories for Indonesia or 2900 for India) which obscure the main features. To improve, focus on ensuring that the data cited directly matches the visual information and that the comparisons between countries are logically structured and mathematically consistent.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report follows a logical structure with an introduction, overview, and body paragraphs. However, the progression is sometimes hindered by awkward phrasing and incorrect cohesive devices. For example, 'Followed by,' is used incorrectly as a sentence starter, and the transition between ideas lacks the smoothness required for higher bands. To improve, focus on using linking words more naturally (e.g., 'In terms of...', 'Regarding...') and ensure that each sentence flows logically into the next without abrupt jumps.

Lexical Resource

There is an attempt to use a variety of vocabulary (e.g., 'illustrates', 'noteworthy', 'commence with'), but there are frequent errors in word choice and collocation. Phrases like 'the number of intake calories', 'the biggest calories consumed country', and 'the least rose' are unnatural and imprecise. Instead of 'the biggest calories consumed country', use 'the country with the highest calorie consumption'. Work on learning collocations related to data description, such as 'a significant increase' or 'the highest figure'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that occasionally impede communication. Issues include subject-verb agreement ('others countries', 'all counties rose only'), incorrect preposition usage, and faulty sentence structures (e.g., 'Despite India increased sharply...'). There are also errors in tense and word form (e.g., 'the least rose'). To improve, practice complex sentence structures using subordinating conjunctions (although, while, whereas) correctly and ensure that your subject-verb agreement is consistent throughout the text.

Answers On The Same Topic:

The chart below shows information about calorie consumption in seven countries in 1975 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

The given bar chart illustrates the comsumption of calories in seven different nations from 1975 to 2000. Overall, Brazil was the country that absorb the most calories among countries, while Bangladesh was the one consuming the least in the first year. In the next 25 years, all countries recorded an upward trend with China overtook […]

Band 6+

The chart below shows information about calorie consumption in seven countries in 1975 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

The given bar graph compares the calorie usage across 7 countries in two different years. Overall, it is clear that consumption remained comparatively high in 2000. China, Brazil and Indonesia utilized about 3000 calories, which are highest among the seven nations. The noticeable changes can be seen in the 2000 as the usage dwindled compared […]

Band 5+

The chart below shows information about calorie consumption in seven countries in 1975 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

The provided bar chart illustrates calorie consumption in seven selected countries for two separate years: 1975 and 2000. Overall, it is evident that calorie consumption was higher in 2000 than in 1975. As a result, the ranking of countries by calorie consumption changed during this period, with China surpassing Brazil to become the country with […]

Band 8+

The chart below shows information about calorie consumption in seven countries in 1975 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

The given bar hart illustrates the use of calorie in seven chosen nations in two separate years 1975 and 2000. Overall, it is clear that the rate of calorie was higher in 2000 than in 1975. Consequently, the ranking of the nations by calories consumption changed over the period and china overtook Brazil to become […]

Band 6+

See All

The chart below shows the percentage of households in different income groups in the uk that had access to the internet between 2002 and 2010.

The diagram below shows the percentage of people of different salary groupsin the UK which had availability to the internet in the 2002 and – 8 years later – 2010. We can witness that in 2010 every income groups has more access to the network rather than 2002. Thus, we can say that internet became […]

Band 4+

j j k k I j k i j i k i

The Graph illustrates the results in points of 3 teams ( A, B and C) throughout the course of 4 seasons. Overall, Team B has seen most success during the interval, as they are with most points every season. They are followed by Team A, where Team B is with the worst performance of them […]

Band 5+

The chart below shows the number of jobs in tourism-related industry in one UK city between 1989 and 2009

The bar chart illustrates the amount of jobs in the tourism-related industry in one UK city between 1989 and 2009. Overall, while the Restaurants had the highest level of jobs in all four periods, Travel and tour the lowest. However Restaurants and Hotels grew more sharply, those Sport leisure and Travel and tour grew only […]

Band 4+

The chart below shows where migrates to Australia came from, by region, in 1987 and 1997.

The bar chart illustrates the propotion of migrants to Australia came from six differents country in 1987 to 1997. Overall, Europe was the highest percentage of migrants segment in both years. By contrast, lowest migrants from Oceania, Middle East Africa, North East Asia, Rest of Asia and North/south America. In 1987, Eourope accounted for the […]

Band 5+

The chart shows the information relating to people within 15 minutes drive service in a particular region in UK in both urban and rural areas.

The bar chart illustrates the proportion of individuals who can drive to different services within 15 minutes or less. This chart also compares the number of people accessing these services in major cities and countryside. Overall, the number of residents driving in cities is higher than those in rural areas. Notably, the figure for secondary […]

Band 6+

See All

Check Your Answer On This Topic?

Generate A Band-9 Sample Answer?

Overall Band Score

Task Response

Coherence & Cohesion

Lexical Resource

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Answers On The Same Topic:

Other Topics:

Plans & Pricing

Free

Premium