Band 6+: what kinds of thing people save money for

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The answer directly addresses the question and provides a wide range of relevant examples, covering both material goods and experiential or long-term goals. The response is well-structured, moving from a general observation to specific categories like technology, real estate, travel, and education. To maintain this level of performance, continue to use varied vocabulary and ensure that your elaborations remain logically connected to the initial prompt.

The answer is coherent and follows a logical progression, moving from material goods to experiences and education. However, there is some slight hesitation in the structure of the second half ('Some money set aside some amount of money...'), which affects the flow. To improve, work on using more varied cohesive devices and ensuring that your sentence structures remain smooth when transitioning between different ideas.

You used appropriate vocabulary such as 'material things,' 'set aside,' and 'pursuing.' However, there was a significant pronunciation/transcription error with 'gargess' (gadgets), and the vocabulary is somewhat basic. To reach a higher band, try to use more sophisticated collocations, such as 'financial security,' 'long-term investments,' or 'discretionary spending.'

There are several grammatical inaccuracies that prevent a higher score. Specifically, 'every person have' should be 'every person has' (subject-verb agreement), and the phrase 'Some money set aside some amount of money' is ungrammatical and redundant. You should practice subject-verb agreement and work on constructing complex sentences that are grammatically sound.