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Band 4+: The first table below shows changes in the total population of New York city from 1800 to 2000. The second and third tables show changes in the population of the 5 districts of the city over the same period. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. write at least 150 words

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The image presents three tables with historical population data. The first table shows the population of New York City (all five districts): in 1800—79,216; in 1900—3,437,202; in 2000—8,008,185. The second table details Manhattan: in 1800 with a population of 60,515 equating to 76% of the total population; in 1900 with 1,850,093 representing 54%; in 2000 with 1,538,096 making up 19%. The third table lists other districts (Brooklyn, Bronx, Queens, Staten Island): in 1800 having a collective population of 18,701 at 24%; in 1900 with 1,587,109 covering 46%; in 2000 reaching 6,471,089 constituting 81%.

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the three tables displayed the modifications in the population of new york city and its five boroghs – over the same period.

Overall, main point highlighted that, new york population increased in numbers in last century. Although other five districts had shown that , Manthattan population were rosen in the early time period , Brooklyn, Bronx and Queen districts population surged later on.

On one hand, in 1800, new york population accounted for 79,216 than manhattan population were less in numbers by 60,515, so its populated area totally showed 76%. While, Brooklyn and Bronx and Queen habitants declined by 18,701 , in form of percentage that was only 24, in 1800.

On the other hand, between 1900 and 2000, population surged from 3,437,202 to 8,009,185. In case of manhattan, by 1900, the population growth slightly higher in figures than its total population was only 54 percantage. Whereas, remaining boroghs were depicted that its habitants were 1587109 in numbers than ever before in 1900. In 2000, manhattan population were1,538,096 as comapred to other four districts it was surpassed by 6471089. So, total populated area was 19% and 81% specifically in 2000.

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The report addresses the main requirements of the task by mentioning the population trends and providing data from the tables. However, there are several issues with how the information is presented. The overview is somewhat confusing, and the comparisons between the districts and the total population are not always clear or logically structured. There are also significant inaccuracies in how data is described (for example, stating Manhattan's population was 'less' than the total in a way that implies a subtraction error, rather than a proportion). To improve, focus on grouping data more logically, ensuring that comparisons are mathematically sound, and refining the clarity of the overview to better reflect the shifting dominance from Manhattan to the other boroughs.

Coherence & Cohesion

The organization of the report is somewhat logical, using 'On one hand' and 'On the other hand' to separate time periods. However, the progression of ideas is frequently interrupted by grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, making it difficult for the reader to follow the comparisons smoothly. To improve, focus on using cohesive devices more naturally and ensure that each sentence clearly connects to the previous one without losing the logical thread of the data comparison.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is limited and often used incorrectly. There are several spelling errors (e.g., 'boroghs', 'Manthattan', 'percantage', 'comapred') and word choice issues (e.g., 'modifications' is not the appropriate term for population changes; 'habitants' is used awkwardly). To improve, work on learning academic synonyms for 'increase' and 'decrease' and practice the correct spelling of common words. Avoid using 'modifications' when referring to demographic shifts; 'growth' or 'changes' is more appropriate.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammatical errors are frequent and significantly impact the clarity of the report. There are issues with subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'population were rosen'), tense consistency, and sentence structure. Many sentences are fragmented or poorly constructed, making the data difficult to interpret (e.g., 'new york population accounted for 79,216 than manhattan population were less in numbers by 60,515'). Focus on mastering basic sentence structures, particularly how to use 'compared to' and how to correctly link subjects with their respective verbs and numbers.

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