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Band 7+: The graph below shows the percentage of people who exercised regularly in a town between 2010 and 2020.

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The image displays a line graph titled 'Percentage of people who exercised regularly in a town, 2010–2020', where the vertical axis represents 'Percentage (%)' from 0 to 80 and the horizontal axis represents the 'Year'. The specific percentages for each year are: 2010, 45%; 2011, 58%; 2012, 42%; 2013, 63%; 2014, 72%; 2015, 39%; 2016, 55%; 2017, 50%; 2018, 34%; 2019, 48%; and 2020, 61%.

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A glance at the graph provided reveals some information about the percentage of people engaged in exercising during the period from 2010 to 2020.

Overall, percentage of citizens in town working out regularly fluctuated over the time period, with highest point in 2014 and lowest in 2018.

Initially, the rate of people exercising stood at 45% in 2010. In 2011, there was a moderate increase to 58% prior to experiencing a steady decline reaching 42% in 2012. Before dropping further to 39% in 2015, it saw a considerable growth the next two years reaching a peak of 72% in 2014.

The first year of the latter half of the decade, people started to workout more and reached 55%. This was followed by a gradual decrease, reaching a low of 34% in 2018. The last two years, there was a marked growth to 48% in 2019 and 61% in the final year.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
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Task Response

The report effectively addresses the task by describing the main trends and fluctuations in the data over the given period. The overall structure is clear, with an introduction, an overview, and a detailed breakdown. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data description (e.g., the drop to 39% in 2015 is mentioned, but the actual value for 2015 is 39%, which is correct, but the sequence of years and values could be more precise). Additionally, some minor omissions and lapses in the logical flow of the timeline are present. To improve, ensure that the chronological order of events is strictly followed and that all key data points are accurately referenced without skipping years.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally well-organized and easy to follow. The information is presented in a logical sequence, starting with an overview and then detailing the changes over time. However, there are minor lapses in cohesion, such as the slightly awkward transition in the third paragraph ('Before dropping further to 39% in 2015, it saw a considerable growth the next two years...'), which could be smoother. Paragraphing is appropriate, but the final paragraph could be more clearly linked to the previous one. To improve, use clearer referencing and transitional phrases to guide the reader more effortlessly through the data.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate and shows some range, with words like 'fluctuated', 'moderate increase', 'steady decline', 'considerable growth', and 'marked growth'. However, there is room for more sophisticated and precise lexical choices. For example, 'people engaged in exercising' could be 'the proportion of residents who exercised regularly', and 'workout' is informal for this context. The phrasing 'the first year of the latter half of the decade' is a bit wordy. To achieve a higher score, aim for more natural and varied collocations, such as 'experienced a significant rise' or 'saw a gradual downturn', and avoid informal terms. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a good range of grammatical structures, including complex sentences with subordinate clauses (e.g., 'Before dropping further... it saw a considerable growth...'). Punctuation is mostly correct, but there are a few errors and awkward phrasings. For instance, 'percentage of citizens in town working out regularly fluctuated' should be 'the percentage of citizens in the town who worked out regularly fluctuated', and 'people started to workout more' should be 'people started to work out more'. The phrase 'the first year of the latter half of the decade' is grammatically correct but stylistically clumsy. To improve, ensure subject-verb agreement and use articles correctly, and consider simplifying overly complex constructions for clarity.

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