Band 6+: What was your dream when you were a child

Your pronunciation is very good. Aim to refine subtleties and intonation to further improve.

This is a good start to answering the question. To improve, consider elaborating on why you wanted to be a doctor. What aspects of the profession appealed to you? Adding specific details will make your response more engaging and demonstrate a wider range of vocabulary and grammatical structures.

The answer is coherent and easy to follow. The slight stumble in the phrasing ('have people and let them feel better') is minor and doesn't significantly impact fluency. A more natural phrasing would improve the score.

The vocabulary is adequate and appropriate for the topic. More sophisticated vocabulary could be used to express the desire to help people (e.g., alleviate suffering, provide care).

The grammar is mostly accurate. The minor error ('have people') is easily corrected. The sentence structure is simple but effective. Using more complex sentence structures would enhance the grammatical range.