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Band 5+: The aging population is becoming a pressing issue in many countries. Some people think that older citizens should continue to work longer in order to contribute to the economy, while others believe that there should be policies to help elderly people retire comfortably and support them financially. What are the main problems associated with an aging population? Do you agree with the idea that older people should work longer, or do you think there are better solutions to support them?

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The aging population is becoming a pressing issue in many countries. Some people think that older citizens should continue to work longer in order to contribute to the economy, while others believe that there should be policies to help elderly people retire comfortably and support them financially. I would say that aged people should not continue to work any further because of the age factors and they deserve a time to enjoy with their family or friends after working all that time. There is however, a solution to support them financially, which is a pension plan.

Older people have worked a lot throughout their life, therefore , I would not recommend them to keep working because humans experience aging which limits some of the ability they had before such as reduction in strength, stamina, and durability, moreover, they also need a personal time with their family especially if they worked 9-5 jobs. A solution to be financially stable while not needing to work for these aged people is a pension plan. This can help them because a company would give them a certain amount of money per month if they had worked or associated with the company before.

People say they need to work longer in order to support themself and their family. If they did not work anymore then they would not be able to support their family anymore, however, a pension plan would support them because it will be giving them money to support themselves and their family until their life ends.

In conclusion, in many countries, an aging population is becoming a great issue. Some say old people need to work so that they can continue to provide for themselves or their family, while others say they should not work any longer and there should be a solution to support them financially. The good news is there is a solution for it which is a pension plan. This will help them financially so that they don’t need to work any longer and acquire the ability to spend personal time with their family.

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