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Band 6+: You are applying for a job. As well as attaching a CV, you need to write a cover letter explaining your reasons for choosing this particular job at this particular company, and why you would be a good hire. Things to include are: 1. Possible qualifications or reasons for you to be hired 2. Your energy and enthusiasm for the job 3. Your past experience in a similar position.

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Dear HR,

I hope my email finds you well and safe. I am writing to you regarding the vacancy you have in the kindergarten department. According to your web site, I understand that you are looking for an experienced teacher. Please let me elaborate on why I find myself suitable for this job.

Firstly, teaching early age is my passion. Therefore, I keep myself updated with the best and most effective methods of teaching. For example, the Montisory course, which I just finished last month, is an amazing way that combine learning and playing and this has added a lot to my career.

Secondly, I am a licensed teacher in the UAE, who has been teaching for 12 years now. I have a bachelor’s degree in Education and a master’s degree in Education Management as well. Besides that, I have a certified course in Middle Leader from Sharjah University.

Please find the attached document of my CV. and for any questions feel free to contact me by email or by phone after 2 pm.

Kind regards,

Noura Bassam

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Overall Band Score

6.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

teaching: 3

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Task Response

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. Minor improvements could enhance the impact.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally easy to follow, but some improvements in flow and paragraphing would enhance readability. The grammar errors noted affect the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

6.5

The vocabulary used is appropriate and mostly accurate, showing a good range. More sophisticated vocabulary could be incorporated.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

5.5

While the letter demonstrates a range of grammatical structures, the presence of grammatical errors impacts the overall accuracy and fluency.

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