Part 1

Band 7+: Do you think animals should be kept in zoos?

See all user-submitted answers on this topic

Skyrocket your IELTS band score by 1-2 points in under a month with our premium plan!

Note: Both the topic and the answer were submitted by one of our users.

94% Accuracy The overall pronunciation accuracy of your speech, reflecting how well a native speaker can comprehend it.

Polished transcript:

Male Female

I don't think so. I suppose a zoo is a place that we build to keep different kinds of animals, while they want to live in their own habitats. For example, as far back as I can remember, eagles tend to live in mountainous areas. This means they want to fly freely without any limitations. While we want to keep them in a zoo, it's really frustrating and unfair.

Actual audio transcript (What native speakers are likely to hear):

I don’t think so. I suppose zoo is a place that we build to keep different kinds of animals while they want to live in their own places. For example, as far back as I can remember, eagles tend to live in mountainous areas. So that means they want to fly freely without any limitations. And while we want to keep them in a zoo, it’s really frustrating and annoying.

Tips: Click on each word to see feedback.

Speaking Time: 28 seconds

Check Your Own Answer On This Topic?

Check My Answer

Generate A Band-9 Sample With Your Idea?

Generate A Sample

Overall Band Score

7.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Vocabulary Repetition:

want: 3

while: 2

Try using synonyms for the above words

Pronunciation

8.5

Your pronunciation is very good. Aim to refine subtleties and intonation to further improve.

Task Response

The answer is well-organized and coherent, directly addressing the question with a clear opinion. The example of eagles is relevant and helps illustrate the point. Consider expanding on the potential benefits of zoos, such as conservation efforts or educational opportunities, to present a more balanced perspective.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is coherent and well-organized. The ideas flow logically, and the example of eagles is relevant and effectively used. Minor repetition of 'while' could be avoided for improved fluency. Consider using more sophisticated linking words to enhance the flow of ideas.

Lexical Resource

Vocabulary is adequate and mostly precise. Words like 'frustrating' and 'annoying' are suitable, but more sophisticated vocabulary could be used to express the ethical concerns of keeping animals in zoos. Consider using words like 'unnatural,' 'captive,' or 'confinement' to show a deeper understanding of the topic.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammar is mostly accurate with only minor slips. The sentence structure is varied, and the grammar is mostly correct. The phrase 'as far back as I can remember' is slightly informal for this context. Consider using more concise and formal sentence structures to improve grammatical range and accuracy.

Answers On The Same Topic:

Do you think animals should be kept in zoos?

Well, this is a very interesting question, but my answer will be it depends on what kind of animals that we are talking about here because there are several kind of you know animals like pets or like even endangered species, so When it comes to pets, I think they should not be kept in […]

Band 6+

Do you think animals should be kept in zoos?

Well, it depends on the zoo. If the zoo was an open area, that the animals have the freedom to run and hunt and live its own natural life. So yes, but if it’s a traditional zoo like small cages and people just come to watch the lion in the cage and trying to provocate […]

Band 6+

Do you think animals should be kept in zoos?

I agree that nowadays zoos can be really exciting and interesting for some children, but for me personally, I’m not really comfortable with the idea of the animals being kept in those, you know, jails. I’ve had a deep affection for animals since I was a child, and for once I came to a zoo. […]

Band 7+

Do you think animals should be kept in zoos?

Yes, I think animals should be kept in a zoo as it’s a nostalgic view and it’s a nostalgic view of watching them and it’s resourceful for children to gain knowledge about them. And I think it’s a good idea to keep animals in a zoo so that children can get aware of the kinds […]

Band 6+

Do you think animals should be kept in zoos?

I would say that it depends on the situation. For example, if the animals are going in danger really soon, I think it would be better to keep them in the zoo. However, for some kinds that are not at risk of extinction, it would be better to leave them in real-world conditions or natural […]

Band 7+

See All

Did you have a favorite hobby when you were a child?

To be honest, in my childhood I didn’t have specific hobbies, but like I was always thinking about the car, I wanted to get driving license when I get 18 years old, that’s why I will always enjoy taking about this.

Band 6+

do you still like going to parks now？

No, the part near my house was demolished to my way for a new urban development two years ago. You know, currently in a driveway, so I cannot allocate time for hanging out. I’m just focusing on studying for exams.

Band 6+

What's your hometown famous for?

Well my hometown is famous for their lakes and some mountains and this is a beautiful place to visit and every year many tourists visit there so it’s to recognize himself.

Band 5+

Do you have the same hobbies as your family members?

Not really. My family members and I have different interests. However, we do have a few hobbies in common. Shut us watching movies or going for work together. I think it’s a great way to spend time as a family.

Band 7+

Are you an angry person?

Not anymore. I mean I used to be really angry and I had a quick temper. I couldn’t control my emotions especially when I was in a tense situations but it’s been a while that I solved this problem. I learned to remove myself from the situation whenever I understand tension is high. So right […]

Band 7+

See All

Check Your Own Answer On This Topic?

Generate A Band-9 Sample With Your Idea?

Overall Band Score

Pronunciation

Task Response

Fluency & Coherence

Lexical Resource

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Answers On The Same Topic:

Other Topics:

Plans & Pricing

Free

Premium