🔥 Today Only: Save 30% on Premium — Offer Ends Soon! - Upgrade Now!

Letter

Band 5+: your manager is leaving the company. You write him a letter in which * You express how do you feel. * Tell him about how he effected you * Ask him about his futur plans.Start you essay with Dear...,

See all user-written answers on this topic

Skyrocket your IELTS band score by 1-2 points in under a month with our premium plan!

Check it out

Note: Both the topic and the answer were created by one of our users.

Dear Kaies,

I am writing this letter to express my feeling ragarding the fact that you are leaving MegaX group.

I feel sad, knowing that the person who supported me the most is going to leave.

But, I feel happy because for sure you will shine elsewhere.

I would like to thank you for your support during my 12 years work. I am very thankful for all your efforts starting from a well detailed onboarding for 9 month, helping me throughout the tickets and first work related issue, finally with my first implimentation projects.

I will miss our football games where I got to know you in person out of professional life.

Let me know please, what will your next step? Are you planning to go to Seliana and take care of your farm as you told me? Or do you still have another station in Tunis?

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely,

Hedi Mimouna

Word Count: 158

Check Your Answer On This Topic?

Check My Answer

Generate A Band-9 Sample Answer?

Generate A Sample

Overall Band Score

5.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. The tone is appropriate and the content is relevant. Minor improvements in structure could enhance the response.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The letter is generally easy to follow. However, some improvements in sentence structure and flow would enhance the overall coherence and cohesion.

Lexical Resource

The letter demonstrates a good range of vocabulary. More precise word choices in certain areas could improve the overall lexical resource.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

While the letter conveys the message, there are several grammatical errors that affect the overall clarity and accuracy. Improving grammatical accuracy is crucial for a higher score.

Answers On The Same Topic:

your manager is leaving the company. You write him a letter in which * You express how do you feel. * Tell him about how he effected you * Ask him about his futur plans.Start you essay with Dear…,

Dear Kaies, I am writing this letter to express my feelings regarding the fact that you are leaving the MegaX group. I feel sad, knowing that the person who has supported me the most is going to leave. But, I feel happy because for sure you will shine elsewhere. I would like to thank you […]

Band 7+

See All

Other Topics:

Your friend has been offered a place on a course at the university where you studied. He/She would like your advice about finding a place to live. Write an email to your friend. In your email: Describe where you lived when you were a student at the university Recommend the best way for him/her to look for accommodation Warn him/her of mistakes students make when choosing accommodation

Dear Hussain, Its been a while since we last talked to each other. I hope everything is going well with you. I received your email in which you explained that you need my help in finding a suitable place to live at my previous university. I’m so glad that you got enrolled in this course. […]

Band 8+

You recently borrowed a book from your colleague and accidentally damaged it. Write a letter to your colleague explaining the situation. You should include details about: - how the book was damaged - why you didn't notice the damage immediately - what you plan to do to make amends

Dear Friend. I hope you are fine, i’m writing to express my gratitude by lending me a book last time i had visited you. I would also like to inform you that , i really enjoy reading the first few pages of the book. while i was traveling by train from Mombasa to Nairobi early […]

Band 4+

You have recently adopted a rescue dog from a local animal shelter. Write a letter to your friend, Chris. In your letter: describe your new dog and its personality; explain how having a pet has changed your daily life; suggest a time and place for him to meet your new dog. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Chris,

Hey Chris, How’s it going? I hope you’re doing well. Yesterday, I went t an animal shelter and I adopted a new dog. I give him a name “Dain” I notice he has a good personalitiy he responed to my order queqly and he have not attec anyone while we were walliking I loved this […]

Band 4+

You recently visited a local restaurant. The service and food were poor. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. Include: What happened Why you were unhappy What you want them to do

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction with the quality of food and service at your restaurant last week. I visited your hotel to celebrate my son’s birthday party on Saturday evening, but the occasions was ruined because of substandard food and below par service. Firstly, the food served […]

Band 6+

Asking for a Letter of Reference You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference. Write a letter to a former teacher. In your letter: • give details of the job • explain why it is important to you • suggest what information your teacher could put in the reference

Dear Sir/Madam, I hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter to ask whether you could provide me a reference letter for a job, as I am applying for a position overseas. I have recently applied for an office administrator position with an international company. The job mainly involves communicating with clients and […]