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Band 7+: What can governments do to prevent illegal hunting?

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There are many things they can do. The first thing is to be more serious about these problems. For example, they could enforce some strict laws, such as sending illegal hunters to lengthy prison sentences and making them pay expensive fines. As a result, I think illegal hunters will be afraid of taking that action a second time. The second thing the government can do, I think, is to be kind and set up strict measures. For example, some governments can hold classes to teach illegal hunters that this is not good for both the environment and humans in the future.

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There are many things they can do. The first thing is to be more serious about these problems. For example, they could infer some strict laws such as sending illegal hunters to a lengthy prison and making them pay for expensive fines. As a result, I think illegal hunters will be afraid of taking that action for the second time. The second thing the government can do, I think, is about being kind and set up strict. For example, some governments can hold classes to teach illegal hunters that this is not good for both environment and humans in the future.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Vocabulary Repetition:

illegal: 3

hunters: 3

thing: 2

example: 2

strict: 2

think: 2

second: 2

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Pronunciation

7.5

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Task Response

The answer is well-organized and coherent, addressing the question directly with relevant suggestions. Consider exploring a wider range of preventative measures, such as improving wildlife protection infrastructure, increasing public awareness campaigns, and collaborating with international organizations. Elaborating on the practical implementation of the suggested solutions would further strengthen the response.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is coherent and mostly fluent. There is some repetition and slightly hesitant phrasing ("The second thing the government can do, I think, is about being kind and set up strict"). Improving the flow and reducing redundancy would enhance fluency.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate and mostly accurate. Words like "lengthy prison" and "expensive fines" are well-chosen. However, more precise language could be used. Instead of 'being kind and set up strict,' a more sophisticated phrase like 'implement educational programs alongside strict enforcement' would be better.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are some grammatical inaccuracies. The phrase "infer some strict laws" should be "enforce some strict laws." The sentence structure is sometimes a bit clumsy. More complex grammatical structures and precise use of articles would improve the score.

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