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Band 5+: You are not happy with the course you are doing at college and would like to change to a different course. Write a letter to the college director requesting to change your course. You should include details about what course are you doing now why you are not satisfied with that course what course you would like to change to.

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to you because I recently choose a course in you college. Now, I have changed my mind and I would like to replace this with another one.

A few weeks ago, I got admitted to your college and I selected Pre-Medical. Later that, I had a talk with my elder brother and I told him about my admission and course selection. My sibling is working in an IT company as a software engineer and he wants me to select computer-related subjects in your intermediate studies. For that particular reason, I am going to decide to change my subject.

Now, I like to do my intermediate in computer in computer science (ICS). I hope you will allow me to replace my study course.

Thanks in advance.

Kind regards,

Obaidullah.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

5.5

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task, providing sufficient detail. However, the explanation for the desired course change could be more convincing and detailed. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally easy to follow, but there are some noticeable issues with coherence and cohesion that affect clarity. Paragraphing is present but could be improved.

Lexical Resource

5.5

The vocabulary used is generally appropriate for the task, but there is limited range and some inaccuracies. More sophisticated vocabulary and precise word choices could enhance the letter.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4.5

There are several grammatical errors and inaccuracies that sometimes affect understanding. A wider range of grammatical structures and more accurate usage would improve the letter.

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