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Band 6+: why do people enjoy playing computer games?

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Thanks to you for discovering this technological field. As I mentioned before, some games allow players to communicate with each other. This way, people can enjoy great times with friends or family and improve their communication skills, as sometimes you can talk with people from different professions.

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Thanks to you discovering this technological field. Like I said before, some games have the possibility to talk with other players. So people can enjoy an excellent time with friends or with their family. And increase communication skills because sometimes you can talk with people who have other parts of work.

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people: 2

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Pronunciation

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Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

Task Response

The answer is relevant to the question and attempts to explain why people enjoy computer games. However, it is quite brief and lacks depth. Consider expanding on the social aspect and exploring other reasons, such as the challenge, escapism, or narrative elements that games offer. More specific examples would also strengthen the response.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is coherent, but the phrasing could be improved for greater fluency. The initial sentence is a bit awkward. Consider rephrasing to something like, "People enjoy computer games for many reasons." or a similar opening.

Lexical Resource

Vocabulary is adequate but lacks precision. Words like "excellent time" and "other parts of work" could be replaced with more specific and sophisticated vocabulary, such as "quality time" and "diverse professional backgrounds." More varied vocabulary would elevate the response.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammar is mostly accurate, with a few minor issues. The sentence structure is simple. While grammatically correct, the answer could benefit from more complex sentence structures to demonstrate a wider range of grammatical accuracy. For example, instead of two short sentences, combine them into one more complex sentence.

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