Band 8+: What was your dream when you were a child

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

This is a great response. The answer directly addresses the question and provides a clear and detailed explanation of the childhood dream. The language used is natural and sophisticated. Consider adding a sentence or two about how this dream has evolved or influenced your current aspirations.

The answer is coherent and well-structured. The only minor issue is the slightly unusual phrasing at the beginning, "When it was me who had to wash off her." While understandable in context, it could be improved for clarity and flow. Consider rephrasing to something like, "As a child, I dreamed of becoming a doctor." or "My childhood dream was to become a doctor."

Excellent vocabulary is used throughout the response. Words like "admired," "hope," "symbolize," and "humanities" demonstrate a sophisticated range and precision of language. The vocabulary is entirely appropriate and effective.

The grammar is largely accurate and the range of structures is good. There is one minor grammatical error ("humanities" should be "humanity"), but this is a small oversight in an otherwise well-constructed response. The use of complex sentences demonstrates a good command of grammar.