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Band 6+: Why do many people choose to move to big cities?

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People move to cities for many reasons. First of all, they want to get a great environment as well as great opportunities. If they stay in big cities, they can explore different infrastructures, and their children will be able to get admitted to well-known schools and colleges. For this reason, another thing is that people want to get a great job. If they stay here, they can find a great job. For these reasons, people want to move to big cities.

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People are moved in cities for many reasons. First of all they want to get a great environment as well as great opportunity. If they will stay in big cities they can explore different, different insta fracture and their children will be called admit in, get admit in well known school college. So for this reason as well as another thing is that people wants to get a great job. So if they will stay here they can get a great job. So for this thing people wants to move in big cities.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Vocabulary Repetition:

they: 5

great: 4

people: 3

cities: 3

want: 3

reasons: 2

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Pronunciation

6.5

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

Task Response

The answer is understandable and addresses the question. However, it could benefit from more detailed explanations and a wider range of reasons for city migration. Consider exploring factors like cultural diversity, access to services, and social opportunities to enrich your response.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is understandable, but there's some repetition and slightly hesitant delivery. Focus on smoother transitions between ideas and avoid unnecessary repetition like 'great job' and 'big cities'. Practice speaking more concisely.

Lexical Resource

Vocabulary is adequate but lacks precision. Instead of 'great environment,' consider more specific terms like 'better amenities' or 'improved living conditions.' 'Infrastructure' is used correctly, but the phrasing could be improved. Try to use more sophisticated vocabulary to express your ideas.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammar contains several errors. The conditional sentences ('If they will stay...') are grammatically incorrect. The sentence structure is often simple and repetitive. Work on using more complex grammatical structures, such as passive voice and relative clauses, to improve accuracy and range.

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