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Cambridge IELTS 13 Academic Writing Test 4 (Task 2)

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In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry.

Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

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  1. Korkem says:

    Nowadays, significant advances in agriculture, many people  around the world suffer from hunger. This problem exists due to several important reasons.

    Firstly, food distribution is unequal. While some countries produce more than enough food, others face shortages because of poor infrastructure and weak economies. Secondly, provety plays a major role , as many people simply cannot afford to buy food. In addition, conflicts and wars disrupt farming activities and prevent food from reaching those in need. Climate change is another factor, as extreme weather conditions such drought and floods reduce crop production.

    To address this issue, governments should improve transportation so food can reach all areas. They should also support farmer with modern technology and financial help. In poorer countries. Reducing food waste is also important.

    In conclusion, hunger remains a global problem due to inequality, proverty and enviromental challenges, but it can be reduced through better management and cooperation  

  2. Zhibek Kenzhebay says:

    6.5 band
    Nowadays, hunger has become a serious issue in many parts of the world. This problem is mainly caused by poverty and food waste. However, it can be solved by government support and reducing food waste.

    There are several reasons why this problem occurs. First of all, the main reason why hunger happens is poverty. People cannot afford food even if it is available because they just do not have money. For example, in poor countries, such as Africa, Sudan, Guyana, there are huge populations but at the same time no normal jobs and salary. It leads to poverty and in the end, hunger. Secondly, in many advanced countries there is a lot of waste of food. Many restaurants and markets throw away food, and it leads to hunger in poor countries too. Distribution of food should be equal. If in some countries food is thrown away, in another countries people are very hungry, it is injustice.

    In order to overcome these problems, it is important to have government encouragement. If nations like Africa, Sudan, and Guyana establish factories and production plants in areas and places where people can find jobs, this problem will be solved. Because with it, people will learn labor and also earn good money, which will be enough to buy food and for harvest growth. Additionally, for solving the second problem, people should reduce food waste. The government must distribute staple foods equally per country. For example, to prevent favoritism, food rations are standardized so that every family receives the same amount.

    In conclusion, hunger appears because people cannot buy food, not because of a lack of food.

  3. Aysel Busra Capan says:

    There is no doubt that, in recent years, even though advanced agricultural technologies have become widespread throughout the world, billions of people still continue to suffer from hunger. While some people strongly believe that the destruction of agricultural land is the main cause of this issue, others argue that the primary contributor is the lack of governmental support. Meanwhile, there are several measures to alleviate this problem, such as reducing damage to agricultural land and ensuring accessible and fair governmental support.

    First and foremost, the number of hungry people has dramatically increased over the past decade. Many farmlands are demolished by large companies due to construction projects. Therefore, a great many people who make a living from the land have difficulty accessing food. On the other hand, although many countries and regions still suffer from severe drought, governments fail to contribute sufficiently to their development. As a result of the lack of governmental support, people may not have sufficient food resources and may experience starvation.

    Another significant point is that inadequate and inaccessible food resources should not be underestimated worldwide. For instance, in the era of rapid urbanisation, many large construction projects, such as creating new residential areas and building roads, have particularly damaged farmlands located in the countryside. These farmlands should be preserved through conscious policies, and governments should provide people suffering from hunger with accessible food resources. Furthermore, as a reasonable solution to this problem, governments should support drought-prone regions by ensuring advanced agricultural infrastructure. In addition, governments could encourage global awareness to address this issue. Consequently, a sense of collective responsibility can be established in the fight against hunger.

    In conclusion, hunger should not be seen as an inevitable problem. Access to food resources is undeniably a basic human right. Therefore, countries worldwide must work together to tackle the issues of starvation and drought.

  4. orhan derdiyok says:

    Even though agriculture has Even though agriculture has progressed rapidly in recent decades, hunger remains a serious issue for many communities across the world. This essay will discuss the main reasons behind this problem and suggest possible solutionsrapidly in recent decades, hunger remains a serious issue for many communities across the world. This essay will discuss the main reasons behind this problem and suggest possible solutions

    One major reason why many people still go hungry is unequal food distribution. Although modern farming methods allow countries to produce large amounts of food, it is not shared fairly. In some regions, especially in developing countries, people do not have access to this food because of poverty or poor transportation systems. In addition, wars, conflicts and natural disasters can destroy farmland and limit food supplies, leaving many families without enough to eat.

    To tackle this problem, governments and international organisations should work together. Firstly, they need to improve food distribution by investing in better roads, storage facilities and transport systems so food can reach rural areas. Secondly, financial aid and modern farming equipment should be provided to poor farmers so that they can increase their food production. Finally, global organisations such as the UN should support countries affected by conflict or natural disasters to help rebuild agricultural systems and ensure people have access to basic food.

    In conclusion, hunger remains a serious issue despite progress in agriculture because of unequal food distribution, poverty and various global crises. However, with stronger cooperation, better infrastructure and more support for farmers, this problem can be reduced in the future. band 6 or 6.5

  5. Sarvar 7.5 eilts says:

    The improvements obtained in agriculture have yet to guarantee subsistence to everyone in the world. Still, many people are doomed to hunger; this is mostly due to the lack of policies to evenly distribute food and overpopulation. However, relocating agro industries within easy reach of people and improving on the amount of food will probably address the issues.

    Rapid growth of the population of earth and poor food distribution practices make the problem with hunger worse in many places of the globe. Although farming practices are improving as never before, food production could not keep pace with the ever-increasing populations of earth. The problems in distribution make the case even worse; while tonnes of edible food ends up in land sites in some areas, every day millions of people are starving in others. Massive poor population costs make it almost impossible to deliver food to who are most in need. Even if it’s delivered, the most affluent can afford it.

    However, the issues can be resolved by taking a few practical steps. Firstly, a tariff should be imposed on the amount of food one person is able to purchase in a day. This prevents people from buying extra foods and makes them buy the amount of food they need, so that other people can buy too. The former Soviet Union, where people could buy only their entitled amount of food according to the number of people in their families, is a clear example of this. Moreover, relocating farming practices to within cities, like on rooftops, will not only reduce transportation costs but also improve the food distribution practices within communities.

    All in all, the problem with hunger is dreadful in most places due to overpopulation and poor distribution policies. Even so, the problem can be solved by improving tariffs on the eligible amount of food and relocating agricultural activities closer to people.

  6. MD Abujar Hossen says:

    It is true that agriculture has developed rapidly in recent years, with many modern technologies and techniques. However, a large number of people around the world still suffer from hunger. This essay will discuss the main reasons for this problem and suggest possible solutions.

    One of the main reasons for this issue is that many farmers, especially in developing countries, do not know how to use modern agricultural technology. They are often poor and uneducated, which makes it difficult for them to apply advanced methods such as using advanced machines, electric motors, fertilizers, and pesticides. For example, people in African and South Asian countries are generally poor and uneducated; that is why they do not want to spend money to buy this type of advanced technologies. Moreover, another main problem is that they do not get fair prices for their harvest and lack access to markets.

    To solve this issue, governments should take serious steps to educate and train farmers. They could set up agricultural training centers and organise seminars to teach farmers how to use modern equipment and farming techniques effectively. In addition, authorities should ensure that farmers receive fair prices for their crops so that they can afford to invest in better tools and technologies. International organizations can also provide support by providing funds and sharing advanced farming methods with poorer nations.

    In conclusion, many people still go hungry because they lack education and access to agricultural technology. By organizing training programs and ensuring fair trade for farmers, governments can help reduce hunger and make agriculture more productive and sustainable.

  7. Tanvir Rahman Fahim says:

    In recent decades, significant progress has been made in agriculture by using modern technology, genetically modified crops, and advanced farming methods. However, hunger remains a significant issue worldwide due to poverty, food insecurity, unequal food distribution, and political instability. It can be tackled through international cooperation, better policies, and investment in sustainable farming.

    One of the main reasons why hunger persists is unequal access to food rather than insufficient production. In fact, the world produces enough food to feed all people around the world, but economic disparity prevents many people from being able to afford it. For instance, in poorer regions of Africa and South Asia, millions of people are battling with poverty every day and face hard times managing nutritious food. In addition, corruption and poor infrastructure often hinder food distribution, and political conflicts worsen food insecurity, which increases the number of deprived people.

    To address this problem, both governments and international organisations must take action. Firstly, the government needs to create strong policies such as subsidies, social welfare programs, and affordable pricing to prevent poverty and take stronger steps to improve the quality of life. Secondly, investing in local agriculture through education, technology, and irrigation to make people skilled, so that they become self-sufficient rather than relying solely on imports or aid. Finally, global collaboration is essential; significantly wealthier nations and institutions like the United Nations can provide financial assistance, food relief, and peacekeeping measures to ensure stability in food-insecure regions.

    In conclusion, while agricultural innovation has increased food production worldwide, hunger continues mainly due to inequality, poverty, and conflict. However, with proper policies, implementation, and coordination among governments and institutions, people around the world can be prevented from going hungry. 

  8. Gultaj Alizade says:

    In today’s world, while there are many new developments in farming, there are still many people living in poor conditions and dying of hunger. The main reason behind this is the overuse and misuse of the world’s resources by strong states; however, if there is more funding and humanitarian help available for poor people, it is possible to overcome this problem.

    Nowadays, it is common to see that all types of advances made in farming happen in developed countries such as America, England, or Canada. Thus, third-world countries do not have enough budget to create new opportunities for their citizens for a better quality of life, and today, most of these nations are controlled by England or France. While 29% of Earth is land and 71% of it is water, there are many states still suffering from a lack of clean water, such as Somalia, Djibouti, and Kenya.

    Additionally, there is a possibility of reducing hunger levels around the world if the governments and non-governmental organizations collaborate to change their policies about stopping the overuse of natural resources and divide them equally among the citizens. Meanwhile, humanitarian organizations such as the Red Cross and UNICEF need to take action to call on the governments to stop the misuse of worldwide reserves. For example, today, roughly 700 million people globally live in extreme poverty, and it is possible to increase the accessibility of basic life needs such as water, food, and clothing for everyone.

    In conclusion, while there is much progress in the field of agriculture, there are still many individuals who suffer from hunger because of the unequal dividing of resources, and this can be solved by changing policies and providing access to food for everyone through government action.

  9. K.H. Shuvo says:

    Despite technological advancements in agricultural production, hunger remains one of the prevalent global issues. Although there may be various causes for this, the three major reasons are: economic hardship, an inadequate supply-chain system for food distribution, and natural disasters. This essay will explore these issues along with their probable solutions.

    One of the paramount reasons for widespread hunger problems is poverty. As many people in the world cannot afford to buy food due to economic hardship resulting from high inflation and the rising cost of daily necessities, they do not have substantial money left for buying enough food. As a result, they still go hungry. To address this, governments as well as private sectors should take initiatives for creating more jobs and developing avenues for more income-generating options for them. Moreover, states as well as many philanthropic organizations may arrange free food for them.

    Another fundamental cause of hunger is a poor supply-chain distribution system. For instance, many parts of the world produce food exceeding their demand, which often cannot be sent to other parts that have considerable food crises due to insufficient transportation systems, poor road infrastructures, and unsuitable storage facilities. Thus, a significant amount of food gets wasted. A practical measure would be the improvement of logistics systems, building enough road infrastructures, and the development of warehousing facilities.

    Natural calamities and climate change are another reason for hunger issues. For example, many agricultural products are destroyed by floods, cyclones, droughts, and other natural disasters, which result from climate change and global warming. To mitigate the impact of climate change on food security, governments and research institutions should invest in climate-resilient farming techniques such as the invention of drought-resistant crops, advanced irrigation systems, and the widespread adoption of roof-top urban farming.

    To recapitulate, despite advancements in technical know-how in the agricultural system, a large number of people still remain hungry mainly because of the financial strain on many people, supply-chain disruptions, and natural disasters. To resolve these issues, governments as well as communities should work together by taking collaborative measures so that hunger problems will be resolved within the shortest possible time.

  10. Khumar Mammadova says:

    Despite the significant developments in agriculture, a number of people are still hungry all over the world. While this can be attributed to developments in only certain countries and expensive agricultural machinery, a number of effective measures can be taken to alleviate the problem.

    One factor contributing to hunger is a financial burden. The economic situation is considered to be one of the most important factors for improvement, regardless of the field. Despite the fact that most countries are at a very advanced level in agriculture, this is not true for the entire world. Consequently, agricultural developments only have an impact on wealthy countries.

    Expensive agricultural machinery is another reason. Some producer countries charge a lot of money for their products. This is because some poor countries cannot afford to buy them, which may lead to an increase in their hunger levels. As a result, agricultural improvements are ineffective if countries do not have the financial means.

    However, there are a number of ways by which this problem can be resolved. One effective measure would be to help countries in need. If countries had enough money, the level of hunger would decrease significantly. In other words, if financial burdens disappear in countries, the level of hunger could decline dramatically worldwide.

    Another solution, which strengthens the first one, is to lower the prices of machinery. It is widely believed that all individuals should be more considerate not only for their families but also for all people. I understand that it is really hard and can lead to a financial burden in the future, but producer countries can lower the prices for certain countries.

    In conclusion, the main reasons behind an increased number of hungry people are one-sided developments and the high prices of agricultural tools. To improve the situation, countries can be more likely to help governments in need and decrease the prices of agricultural products.

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