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The graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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Some people think that competition at work, at school and in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
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It is true that some individuals thought that competetion is very crucial not only for daily life but also for at work and at school, while others believe that we should ignore any type of competition to enhance our cooperate. I will discuss both views and will give my opinion.
On the one hand, there are a number of causes why competition is very significant for us. One possible reason is that hold concentrate. By joining any type of event people can face many problem. For this reason,individuals always want to controll their focus on work. As a consequences, people donot waste their valuable time. Another possible reason is that build strong career. For instance, when a person join any event for competition with various type of skillful person, then they can know their weakness and strongness. By knowing this, they can easily build their career with strong point.
On the other hand, there are few reasons why cooperate is better rather than competition.humanity and kindness among on them. For instance, many individuals join the same event and every person want to achieve better score from others . But, it is not possible to give better score of all people. For this reason, people feel uncomfortable and reduce their kindness.Finally, they are become selfish. In addition, mentally pressure is also responsible among on them. When people perticipant any occasion then their parents give them more pressure and suggetion, which is totally damage their positive thinking. So, sometimes people take alternative way to get better score, which is not acceptable on events.
In conclusion, although some people thought that we should ignore competition for enhance cooperate but I think competition is very crucial for all classes people. In my opinion, competition have more positive things include, which is very significant for build individuals career.
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The Line Graph Illustrates the details of members from different projects at one social center in Both Countries such as (Melbourne, Australia) over the given time in question between 2000 to 2020. The information are given in numbers.
Overall, it is clear that the counting of participants in film club recorded consistently highest figures throughout the period, while the Amateur dramatics remained the lowest. In addition, while, Martial arts was Fluctuated steadily over the period. on the other side remained all shown the upward trends in final year.
Firestly, in flim club the charater of contributers started just above 65 number in 2000, whereas in some fell down at the mid of year its went on 60% confermly, after that at the end of period the attempt the stable position in 2020. However, the other members for layering Martial arts just over 39 ratio. and its continue fluctuated at the final year. Mover Amateur dramatics peaked level in 2005 its rose up 29 of groups people. after that it was dropped sharply and carry at the same fell position at end of 2020
on the other hand, Table tennis started approximately just around 15 number of participants, in the mid- center in 2010 its show the steadily position then it was rose up sharply. and became a second highest uses in 2020. at the end Musical performances experienced excite level started with 0 Number of people and went up significantly just near 12 no’s at the thought-out the period 2020.
The line graph compares with the numbers of participants for various activities at five social cente, namely film club, martial arts, amateur dramatics, table tennis and musical performances in Melbourne, Australia between 2000 and 2020.
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