You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words.
The graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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Band 7 :
The graph illustrates the number of participants in different activities at one social center in Melbourne, Australia, from 2000 to 2020.
Overall, the graph shows that there are five activities currently being participated in by many people: film club, martial arts, amateur dramatics, table tennis, and musical performances. These five activities have varying numbers of participants from year to year and have their own trends. However, it can be seen that since 2000, the number of participants in film club has been significantly higher than in other activities until 2020.
This essay will discuss the upward and downward trends seen year by year. In 2000, more than 60 people had joined film club, followed by participants in martial arts, amateur dramatics, and table tennis, while musical performances had no participants at all. Moving on to 2005, film club still held the top spot, although there was a slight decline. This trend also occurred in martial arts, which experienced a decline. In contrast to previous years, amateur dramatics and table tennis actually experienced an increase.
From 2010 to 2020, there was a very significant trend, with participants in film club experiencing a drastic decline and table tennis experiencing a surge. The other three activities experienced a less significant up-and-down trend.
Band 7.5
The line graph illustrates the number of participants in five different activities between 2000 and 2020.
Overall, it can be seen that the film club remained the most popular activity throughout the period, while table tennis showed the most significant growth. In contrast, amateur dramatics became less popular over time.
In 2000, the film club had about 65 participants, and this number stayed stable, slightly decreasing to around 60 in 2010 before rising again to about 66 in 2020. Martial arts fluctuated during the period, starting at approximately 35 participants, dropping to around 32 in 2005, then increasing at about 36 in 2020.
Amateur dramatics showed a downward trend. At the begining of the period, it increased slightly from about 25 in 2000 to 28 in 2005, but then fell sreadily to around 6 by 2020. On the other hand, table tennis showed strong growth. It started at about 15 in 2000 and rose significantly to over 50 by 2020, especially after 2010.
Finally, musical performances had no participants at the begining, but the number increased to around 18 in 2020.
In conclusion, while some activities remained stable or declined, others, particularly table tennis and musical performances, became more popular.
The proportion of participants for various activities such as film club, martial arts, amateur dramatics, table tennis, musical performance etc at a social organization in Melbourne, Australia for the time 2000 to 2020 is illustrates by the graph.
Overall, a concise analysis of the graph showed that, members had a great interest in film club and there were growing engagement in table tennis and musical performance, whereas attraction towards amateur dramatics loses in 20 years, moreover, love for martial arts showed fluctuation.
To begin with, participants had higher interest in joinig in film club with 64% to 67% engagements over twenty years. Members love for table tennis was not that high until 2010 as their joining rate was 18%, 19% and 19% in respectively 2000, 2005, 2010 and after that it rose enormously in last ten years with 40% in 2015 and 58% in 2020.
Martial arts performer showed up and downs over the time period. It started from 38% in 2000 and goes with 35% in 2005, 39% in 2010, 38% in 2015 and lastly 37% in 2020.
Musical performance was attached in the list in 2005. It went to 10% in first five years, next five it rose 3% and in last five years it come up in 17% which indicated that members who joined this activity increased with the time. On the other hand, people who did Amateur dramatics faced downward term. it started with 27% engagement in 2000 and with in 2020 it fallen dramatically to only 5%.
Grafik garis tersebut menggambarkan jumlah peserta dalam lima aktivitas berbeda antara tahun 2000 dan 2020.
Secara keseluruhan, klub film secara konsisten memiliki jumlah peserta tertinggi sepanjang periode tersebut.
Topic: Grafik di bawah ini memberikan informasi tentang jumlah peserta untuk berbagai kegiatan di salah satu pusat sosial di Melbourne, Australia untuk periode tahun 2000 hingga 2020.Ringkas informasi tersebut dengan memilih dan melaporkan fitur-fitur utama, dan buat perbandingan jika relevan.
Overall Band Score:
9
Vocabulary Complexity:
C2 – Complex
Continue to challenge and refine your language choices.
Grammar Mistakes:
0
Vocabulary Repetition:
peserta: 5
sekitar: 3
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Original
Corrected
The line graph illustrates the number of participants involved in five different activities at a social centre in Melbourne, Australia, from 2000 to 2020.
Overall, the film club remained the most popular activity throughout the period, while table tennis and musical performances experienced significant growth. In contrast, amateur dramatics saw a considerable decline, whereas martial arts fluctuated slightly.
In detail, participation in the film club stayed relatively stable, starting at around 65 people in 2000, dipping to approximately 60 in 2010, and then recovering to nearly 68 by 2020. Similarly, martial arts numbers varied between about 30 and 40 participants over the years.
On the other hand, table tennis showed the most notable increase, rising from fewer than 20 participants in 2000 to around 50 in 2020. Musical performances also grew steadily, beginning with almost no participants in 2005 and reaching about 20 by the end of the period.
By contrast, amateur dramatics declined sharply, dropping from roughly 25 participants in 2000 to just around 5 in 2020.
Word Count: 168
The line graph illustrates the number of participants involved in five different activities at a social centre in Melbourne, Australia, from 2000 to 2020.
Overall, the film club remained the most popular activity throughout the period, while table tennis and musical performances experienced significant growth. In contrast, amateur dramatics saw a considerable decline, whereas martial arts fluctuated slightly.
In detail, participation in the film club stayed relatively stable, starting at around 65 people in 2000, dipping to approximately 60 in 2010, and then recovering to nearly 68 by 2020. Similarly, martial arts numbers varied between about 30 and 40 participants over the years.
On the other hand, table tennis showed the most notable increase, rising from fewer than 20 participants in 2000 to around 50 in 2020. Musical performances also grew steadily, beginning with almost no participants in 2005 and reaching about 20 by the end of the period.
By contrast, amateur dramatics declined sharply, dropping from roughly 25 participants in 2000 to just around 5 in 2020.
Word Count: 168
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Task Response
Coherence & Cohesion
Lexical Resource
Grammatical Range & Accuracy
8
9
9
9
The report effectively summarizes the main trends and provides relevant comparisons. The description of each activity is generally accurate, although there are some minor inaccuracies in the data reported. To improve, ensure all data points are as accurate as possible and consider adding more specific details to enhance the overall analysis.
The report is very well-organized and easy to follow. The information is presented logically, with a clear overview followed by detailed descriptions of each activity. Transitions between paragraphs are smooth and natural, enhancing the overall coherence.
The report demonstrates a wide range of vocabulary used accurately and appropriately. The language is sophisticated and precise, effectively conveying the trends and changes in participation numbers. Terms like ‘fluctuated slightly,’ ‘notable increase,’ and ‘declined sharply’ add depth and clarity to the description.
The report exhibits excellent grammatical control and accuracy. A variety of sentence structures are used effectively, and there are virtually no grammatical errors or phrasing issues. This high level of accuracy contributes to the overall clarity and professionalism of the report.
Topic: Grafik di bawah ini memberikan informasi tentang jumlah peserta untuk berbagai kegiatan di salah satu pusat sosial di Melbourne, Australia untuk periode tahun 2000 hingga 2020.Ringkas informasi tersebut dengan memilih dan melaporkan fitur-fitur utama, dan buat perbandingan jika relevan.
Overall Band Score:
9
Vocabulary Complexity:
C2 – Complex
Continue to challenge and refine your language choices.
Grammar Mistakes:
0
Vocabulary Repetition:
peserta: 5
sekitar: 3
—-Corrected Writing—-
Original
Corrected
The line graph illustrates the number of participants involved in five different activities at a social centre in Melbourne, Australia, from 2000 to 2020.
Overall, the film club remained the most popular activity throughout the period, while table tennis and musical performances experienced significant growth. In contrast, amateur dramatics saw a considerable decline, whereas martial arts fluctuated slightly.
In detail, participation in the film club stayed relatively stable, starting at around 65 people in 2000, dipping to approximately 60 in 2010, and then recovering to nearly 68 by 2020. Similarly, martial arts numbers varied between about 30 and 40 participants over the years.
On the other hand, table tennis showed the most notable increase, rising from fewer than 20 participants in 2000 to around 50 in 2020. Musical performances also grew steadily, beginning with almost no participants in 2005 and reaching about 20 by the end of the period.
By contrast, amateur dramatics declined sharply, dropping from roughly 25 participants in 2000 to just around 5 in 2020.
Word Count: 168
The line graph illustrates the number of participants involved in five different activities at a social centre in Melbourne, Australia, from 2000 to 2020.
Overall, the film club remained the most popular activity throughout the period, while table tennis and musical performances experienced significant growth. In contrast, amateur dramatics saw a considerable decline, whereas martial arts fluctuated slightly.
In detail, participation in the film club stayed relatively stable, starting at around 65 people in 2000, dipping to approximately 60 in 2010, and then recovering to nearly 68 by 2020. Similarly, martial arts numbers varied between about 30 and 40 participants over the years.
On the other hand, table tennis showed the most notable increase, rising from fewer than 20 participants in 2000 to around 50 in 2020. Musical performances also grew steadily, beginning with almost no participants in 2005 and reaching about 20 by the end of the period.
By contrast, amateur dramatics declined sharply, dropping from roughly 25 participants in 2000 to just around 5 in 2020.
Word Count: 168
—-Feedback—-
Task Response
Coherence & Cohesion
Lexical Resource
Grammatical Range & Accuracy
8
9
9
9
The report effectively summarizes the main trends and provides relevant comparisons. The description of each activity is generally accurate, although there are some minor inaccuracies in the data reported. To improve, ensure all data points are as accurate as possible and consider adding more specific details to enhance the overall analysis.
The report is very well-organized and easy to follow. The information is presented logically, with a clear overview followed by detailed descriptions of each activity. Transitions between paragraphs are smooth and natural, enhancing the overall coherence.
The report demonstrates a wide range of vocabulary used accurately and appropriately. The language is sophisticated and precise, effectively conveying the trends and changes in participation numbers. Terms like ‘fluctuated slightly,’ ‘notable increase,’ and ‘declined sharply’ add depth and clarity to the description.
The report exhibits excellent grammatical control and accuracy. A variety of sentence structures are used effectively, and there are virtually no grammatical errors or phrasing issues. This high level of accuracy contributes to the overall clarity and professionalism of the report.
Summary of Social Centre Activities in Melbourne (2000–2020)
The line graph shows the number of participants in five activities at a social centre in Melbourne from 2000 to 2020.
Overall, the film club had the highest number of participants, while amateur dramatics saw a big decline. Table tennis and musical performances increased steadily, and martial arts gradually decreased.
In 2000, the film club started with about 67 participants, dropped slightly to 59 in 2010, and returned to 67 in 2020. Martial arts began with 45 participants and fell to around 36 by 2020. Table tennis rose from 27 participants in 2000 to about 46 in 2020, surpassing martial arts after 2015. Musical performances grew from 11 to nearly 21 participants. Meanwhile, amateur dramatics declined sharply from 34 to 11 participants over the period.
This shows that some activities became more popular over time, while others lost interest among participants.
The line graph displays the numbers of members for various activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia between 2000 and 2020.
Overall, film club had the highest number of members throughout the period among the 5 activities. It reached 65 members in 2020, followed by table tennis, martial arts, musical performances and amateur dramatics in fifth place.
Martial arts was the second highest in the number of participants with nearly 37 members at the start of the period. But it experienced a fluctuation and lost its second position in 2015 to table tennis and finished the period without any significant change in its number of participants.
In addition, Table tennis experienced a significant growth in number of participants between 2010 and 2020 by surpassing amateur dramatics and martial arts and reaching approximately 55 members.
On the other hand, there was a slight rise in the number of members for amateur dramatics from 2000 to 2005, with a peak of nearly 30 participants. However experienced a gradual fall between 2005 and 2020, dropping to 5 participants.
Musical performances were the lowest among the 5 activities with 0 members between 2000 and 2005, then experienced a considerable increase from 2005 to 2020 with almost 20 members at the end of the period.
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Very specific and clear correction, thank you
Band 7 :
The graph illustrates the number of participants in different activities at one social center in Melbourne, Australia, from 2000 to 2020.
Overall, the graph shows that there are five activities currently being participated in by many people: film club, martial arts, amateur dramatics, table tennis, and musical performances. These five activities have varying numbers of participants from year to year and have their own trends. However, it can be seen that since 2000, the number of participants in film club has been significantly higher than in other activities until 2020.
This essay will discuss the upward and downward trends seen year by year. In 2000, more than 60 people had joined film club, followed by participants in martial arts, amateur dramatics, and table tennis, while musical performances had no participants at all. Moving on to 2005, film club still held the top spot, although there was a slight decline. This trend also occurred in martial arts, which experienced a decline. In contrast to previous years, amateur dramatics and table tennis actually experienced an increase.
From 2010 to 2020, there was a very significant trend, with participants in film club experiencing a drastic decline and table tennis experiencing a surge. The other three activities experienced a less significant up-and-down trend.
Band 7.5
The line graph illustrates the number of participants in five different activities between 2000 and 2020.
Overall, it can be seen that the film club remained the most popular activity throughout the period, while table tennis showed the most significant growth. In contrast, amateur dramatics became less popular over time.
In 2000, the film club had about 65 participants, and this number stayed stable, slightly decreasing to around 60 in 2010 before rising again to about 66 in 2020. Martial arts fluctuated during the period, starting at approximately 35 participants, dropping to around 32 in 2005, then increasing at about 36 in 2020.
Amateur dramatics showed a downward trend. At the begining of the period, it increased slightly from about 25 in 2000 to 28 in 2005, but then fell sreadily to around 6 by 2020. On the other hand, table tennis showed strong growth. It started at about 15 in 2000 and rose significantly to over 50 by 2020, especially after 2010.
Finally, musical performances had no participants at the begining, but the number increased to around 18 in 2020.
In conclusion, while some activities remained stable or declined, others, particularly table tennis and musical performances, became more popular.
The data of the graph line provided is not the same as described in the Brief Image Description.
The proportion of participants for various activities such as film club, martial arts, amateur dramatics, table tennis, musical performance etc at a social organization in Melbourne, Australia for the time 2000 to 2020 is illustrates by the graph.
Overall, a concise analysis of the graph showed that, members had a great interest in film club and there were growing engagement in table tennis and musical performance, whereas attraction towards amateur dramatics loses in 20 years, moreover, love for martial arts showed fluctuation.
To begin with, participants had higher interest in joinig in film club with 64% to 67% engagements over twenty years. Members love for table tennis was not that high until 2010 as their joining rate was 18%, 19% and 19% in respectively 2000, 2005, 2010 and after that it rose enormously in last ten years with 40% in 2015 and 58% in 2020.
Martial arts performer showed up and downs over the time period. It started from 38% in 2000 and goes with 35% in 2005, 39% in 2010, 38% in 2015 and lastly 37% in 2020.
Musical performance was attached in the list in 2005. It went to 10% in first five years, next five it rose 3% and in last five years it come up in 17% which indicated that members who joined this activity increased with the time. On the other hand, people who did Amateur dramatics faced downward term. it started with 27% engagement in 2000 and with in 2020 it fallen dramatically to only 5%.
Grafik garis tersebut menggambarkan jumlah peserta dalam lima aktivitas berbeda antara tahun 2000 dan 2020.
Secara keseluruhan, klub film secara konsisten memiliki jumlah peserta tertinggi sepanjang periode tersebut.
Topic: Grafik di bawah ini memberikan informasi tentang jumlah peserta untuk berbagai kegiatan di salah satu pusat sosial di Melbourne, Australia untuk periode tahun 2000 hingga 2020.Ringkas informasi tersebut dengan memilih dan melaporkan fitur-fitur utama, dan buat perbandingan jika relevan.
Overall Band Score:
9
Vocabulary Complexity:
C2 – Complex
Continue to challenge and refine your language choices.
Grammar Mistakes:
0
Vocabulary Repetition:
peserta: 5
sekitar: 3
—-Corrected Writing—-
Original
Corrected
The line graph illustrates the number of participants involved in five different activities at a social centre in Melbourne, Australia, from 2000 to 2020.
Overall, the film club remained the most popular activity throughout the period, while table tennis and musical performances experienced significant growth. In contrast, amateur dramatics saw a considerable decline, whereas martial arts fluctuated slightly.
In detail, participation in the film club stayed relatively stable, starting at around 65 people in 2000, dipping to approximately 60 in 2010, and then recovering to nearly 68 by 2020. Similarly, martial arts numbers varied between about 30 and 40 participants over the years.
On the other hand, table tennis showed the most notable increase, rising from fewer than 20 participants in 2000 to around 50 in 2020. Musical performances also grew steadily, beginning with almost no participants in 2005 and reaching about 20 by the end of the period.
By contrast, amateur dramatics declined sharply, dropping from roughly 25 participants in 2000 to just around 5 in 2020.
Word Count: 168
The line graph illustrates the number of participants involved in five different activities at a social centre in Melbourne, Australia, from 2000 to 2020.
Overall, the film club remained the most popular activity throughout the period, while table tennis and musical performances experienced significant growth. In contrast, amateur dramatics saw a considerable decline, whereas martial arts fluctuated slightly.
In detail, participation in the film club stayed relatively stable, starting at around 65 people in 2000, dipping to approximately 60 in 2010, and then recovering to nearly 68 by 2020. Similarly, martial arts numbers varied between about 30 and 40 participants over the years.
On the other hand, table tennis showed the most notable increase, rising from fewer than 20 participants in 2000 to around 50 in 2020. Musical performances also grew steadily, beginning with almost no participants in 2005 and reaching about 20 by the end of the period.
By contrast, amateur dramatics declined sharply, dropping from roughly 25 participants in 2000 to just around 5 in 2020.
Word Count: 168
—-Feedback—-
Task Response
Coherence & Cohesion
Lexical Resource
Grammatical Range & Accuracy
8
9
9
9
The report effectively summarizes the main trends and provides relevant comparisons. The description of each activity is generally accurate, although there are some minor inaccuracies in the data reported. To improve, ensure all data points are as accurate as possible and consider adding more specific details to enhance the overall analysis.
The report is very well-organized and easy to follow. The information is presented logically, with a clear overview followed by detailed descriptions of each activity. Transitions between paragraphs are smooth and natural, enhancing the overall coherence.
The report demonstrates a wide range of vocabulary used accurately and appropriately. The language is sophisticated and precise, effectively conveying the trends and changes in participation numbers. Terms like ‘fluctuated slightly,’ ‘notable increase,’ and ‘declined sharply’ add depth and clarity to the description.
The report exhibits excellent grammatical control and accuracy. A variety of sentence structures are used effectively, and there are virtually no grammatical errors or phrasing issues. This high level of accuracy contributes to the overall clarity and professionalism of the report.
Topic: Grafik di bawah ini memberikan informasi tentang jumlah peserta untuk berbagai kegiatan di salah satu pusat sosial di Melbourne, Australia untuk periode tahun 2000 hingga 2020.Ringkas informasi tersebut dengan memilih dan melaporkan fitur-fitur utama, dan buat perbandingan jika relevan.
Overall Band Score:
9
Vocabulary Complexity:
C2 – Complex
Continue to challenge and refine your language choices.
Grammar Mistakes:
0
Vocabulary Repetition:
peserta: 5
sekitar: 3
—-Corrected Writing—-
Original
Corrected
The line graph illustrates the number of participants involved in five different activities at a social centre in Melbourne, Australia, from 2000 to 2020.
Overall, the film club remained the most popular activity throughout the period, while table tennis and musical performances experienced significant growth. In contrast, amateur dramatics saw a considerable decline, whereas martial arts fluctuated slightly.
In detail, participation in the film club stayed relatively stable, starting at around 65 people in 2000, dipping to approximately 60 in 2010, and then recovering to nearly 68 by 2020. Similarly, martial arts numbers varied between about 30 and 40 participants over the years.
On the other hand, table tennis showed the most notable increase, rising from fewer than 20 participants in 2000 to around 50 in 2020. Musical performances also grew steadily, beginning with almost no participants in 2005 and reaching about 20 by the end of the period.
By contrast, amateur dramatics declined sharply, dropping from roughly 25 participants in 2000 to just around 5 in 2020.
Word Count: 168
The line graph illustrates the number of participants involved in five different activities at a social centre in Melbourne, Australia, from 2000 to 2020.
Overall, the film club remained the most popular activity throughout the period, while table tennis and musical performances experienced significant growth. In contrast, amateur dramatics saw a considerable decline, whereas martial arts fluctuated slightly.
In detail, participation in the film club stayed relatively stable, starting at around 65 people in 2000, dipping to approximately 60 in 2010, and then recovering to nearly 68 by 2020. Similarly, martial arts numbers varied between about 30 and 40 participants over the years.
On the other hand, table tennis showed the most notable increase, rising from fewer than 20 participants in 2000 to around 50 in 2020. Musical performances also grew steadily, beginning with almost no participants in 2005 and reaching about 20 by the end of the period.
By contrast, amateur dramatics declined sharply, dropping from roughly 25 participants in 2000 to just around 5 in 2020.
Word Count: 168
—-Feedback—-
Task Response
Coherence & Cohesion
Lexical Resource
Grammatical Range & Accuracy
8
9
9
9
The report effectively summarizes the main trends and provides relevant comparisons. The description of each activity is generally accurate, although there are some minor inaccuracies in the data reported. To improve, ensure all data points are as accurate as possible and consider adding more specific details to enhance the overall analysis.
The report is very well-organized and easy to follow. The information is presented logically, with a clear overview followed by detailed descriptions of each activity. Transitions between paragraphs are smooth and natural, enhancing the overall coherence.
The report demonstrates a wide range of vocabulary used accurately and appropriately. The language is sophisticated and precise, effectively conveying the trends and changes in participation numbers. Terms like ‘fluctuated slightly,’ ‘notable increase,’ and ‘declined sharply’ add depth and clarity to the description.
The report exhibits excellent grammatical control and accuracy. A variety of sentence structures are used effectively, and there are virtually no grammatical errors or phrasing issues. This high level of accuracy contributes to the overall clarity and professionalism of the report.
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Summary of Social Centre Activities in Melbourne (2000–2020)
The line graph shows the number of participants in five activities at a social centre in Melbourne from 2000 to 2020.
Overall, the film club had the highest number of participants, while amateur dramatics saw a big decline. Table tennis and musical performances increased steadily, and martial arts gradually decreased.
In 2000, the film club started with about 67 participants, dropped slightly to 59 in 2010, and returned to 67 in 2020. Martial arts began with 45 participants and fell to around 36 by 2020. Table tennis rose from 27 participants in 2000 to about 46 in 2020, surpassing martial arts after 2015. Musical performances grew from 11 to nearly 21 participants. Meanwhile, amateur dramatics declined sharply from 34 to 11 participants over the period.
This shows that some activities became more popular over time, while others lost interest among participants.
Band 7.0+
The line graph displays the numbers of members for various activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia between 2000 and 2020.
Overall, film club had the highest number of members throughout the period among the 5 activities. It reached 65 members in 2020, followed by table tennis, martial arts, musical performances and amateur dramatics in fifth place.
Martial arts was the second highest in the number of participants with nearly 37 members at the start of the period. But it experienced a fluctuation and lost its second position in 2015 to table tennis and finished the period without any significant change in its number of participants.
In addition, Table tennis experienced a significant growth in number of participants between 2010 and 2020 by surpassing amateur dramatics and martial arts and reaching approximately 55 members.
On the other hand, there was a slight rise in the number of members for amateur dramatics from 2000 to 2005, with a peak of nearly 30 participants. However experienced a gradual fall between 2005 and 2020, dropping to 5 participants.
Musical performances were the lowest among the 5 activities with 0 members between 2000 and 2005, then experienced a considerable increase from 2005 to 2020 with almost 20 members at the end of the period.
overtaken by table tennis
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