IELTS 21 Writing Test 4 (Task 1)
The charts illustrate the survey results of library users at a university.
Overall, it is clear that full-time undergraduate students were the highest proportion of library users, while the number of academic staff was the lowest compared to other categories. Additionally, the helpfulness of staff was the most significant factor affecting user satisfaction.
Looking at the chart in detail, the main users of this library were the full-time undergraduate students, at around 44%, while the number of academic staff was the lowest share, at approximately 7%.
In addition, the helpfulness of staff was the most important factor influencing user satisfaction; 95% of users said they were very satisfied. However, the availability of journals was a factor that needs to be improved to enhance user satisfaction in this library.
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The diagram illustrates the process of manufacturing fabric from bamboo, showing the various stages involved from planting the bamboo to producing the finished fabric.
Overall, the process consists of nine stages, beginning with planting bamboo in spring and ending with the production of bamboo fabric. It is a linear process in which the bamboo is gradually transformed into fabric or clothes through several mechanical and chemical stages.
Beginning with the first stage, bamboo is planted in spring. The bamboo is then harvested in the autumn. Thereafter, the plant is cut into strips, Following cutting, the strips are crushed well to make liquid pulp. The liquid pulp is then filtered to separate the long fibers. Next, the fibers are softened by adding amine oxide and water.
Once these six stages are complete, the fibers are spun into yarn. Next, the yarn is woven into fabric, before the finished product is finally produced.
The provided bar chart elucidates the percentages of households (rent, ownership) in England and Wales from 1918 to 2011. Overall, households in rented accommodation experienced a gradual decrease, whereas households in owned accommodation followed an opposite pattern.
According to the graph, the percentage of rented accommodation was 78% in 1918, being the highest point in the chart. Therefore, the index experienced a period of stability at 68% in 1939 and 1953, yet it declined consistently to 30% in 1991. However, the percentage showed a slight increase at the end of the timeframe.
In contrast, the households in owned accommodation started the period with the smallest percentage at 20%, while levelling up consistently to 70% in 2001. However, the percentage of owned houses dropped marginally to 68% in 2011.
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IELTS 21 Writing Test 4 (Task 1)
The charts illustrate the survey results of library users at a university.
Overall, it is clear that full-time undergraduate students were the highest proportion of library users, while the number of academic staff was the lowest compared to other categories. Additionally, the helpfulness of staff was the most significant factor affecting user satisfaction.
Looking at the chart in detail, the main users of this library were the full-time undergraduate students, at around 44%, while the number of academic staff was the lowest share, at approximately 7%.
In addition, the helpfulness of staff was the most important factor influencing user satisfaction; 95% of users said they were very satisfied. However, the availability of journals was a factor that needs to be improved to enhance user satisfaction in this library.
band 9
The diagram illustrates the process of manufacturing fabric from bamboo, showing the various stages involved from planting the bamboo to producing the finished fabric.
Overall, the process consists of nine stages, beginning with planting bamboo in spring and ending with the production of bamboo fabric. It is a linear process in which the bamboo is gradually transformed into fabric or clothes through several mechanical and chemical stages.
Beginning with the first stage, bamboo is planted in spring. The bamboo is then harvested in the autumn. Thereafter, the plant is cut into strips, Following cutting, the strips are crushed well to make liquid pulp. The liquid pulp is then filtered to separate the long fibers. Next, the fibers are softened by adding amine oxide and water.
Once these six stages are complete, the fibers are spun into yarn. Next, the yarn is woven into fabric, before the finished product is finally produced.
The provided bar chart elucidates the percentages of households (rent, ownership) in England and Wales from 1918 to 2011. Overall, households in rented accommodation experienced a gradual decrease, whereas households in owned accommodation followed an opposite pattern.
According to the graph, the percentage of rented accommodation was 78% in 1918, being the highest point in the chart. Therefore, the index experienced a period of stability at 68% in 1939 and 1953, yet it declined consistently to 30% in 1991. However, the percentage showed a slight increase at the end of the timeframe.
In contrast, the households in owned accommodation started the period with the smallest percentage at 20%, while levelling up consistently to 70% in 2001. However, the percentage of owned houses dropped marginally to 68% in 2011.