Band 6+: 13.What work do you do?

Your pronunciation is below average and may be understood with some effort. Pay attention to common phonemes that are challenging for you.

The response directly answers the question about the speaker's current work status and future plans. It could be improved by providing more detail about the field of study or the specific type of work desired after graduation.

The response is generally coherent and easy to follow. However, the phrase "especially being actually related to technology" is a bit awkward and could be phrased more smoothly. Consider using simpler connectors or rephrasing for better flow.

The vocabulary is adequate for the question. Using more specific vocabulary related to the field of technology could enhance the response. For example, mentioning a specific area of interest within technology would demonstrate a broader lexical range.

The grammar is mostly accurate, but the phrase "especially being actually related to technology" contains redundancy and could be grammatically improved. Replacing it with "especially in technology" or "particularly in a technology-related field" would be more accurate and natural.