Part 3

Band 7+: 2. In your view, should children be taught to help others?

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Well, in my opinion, children should be taught to help others because it's important for them. As a result, children can become more responsible for others and the environment. In addition, there are a lot of people who need assistance, and children can help them. Moreover, these people will be happier because of their help. So, I consider that children should learn to help others.

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Well, in my opinion, children should be taught to help others because it’s important for them as a result, children can be more responsible for others and environment. And in addition, there are a lot of people who need some assistance and children can help them. Moreover, these people will be more happy because of their help. So I consider that children should study to help others.

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children: 4

help: 4

others: 3

should: 2

because: 2

people: 2

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