Band 6+: 2. Why are some people demotivated at their work ?

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

The answer addresses the question directly and provides relevant reasons for demotivation at work. To further enhance the response, consider elaborating on the reasons provided with specific examples or additional details.

The answer is relatively coherent, but could benefit from a clearer structure. Consider using transition words or phrases to connect your ideas more smoothly. For example, you could add 'Firstly' or 'One reason is' at the beginning.

The vocabulary is adequate, but could be more precise. 'No room to grow' is a good start, but you could expand on this with more specific examples of what 'growth' means in a professional context (e.g., career advancement, skill development). Also, consider using synonyms for 'unappreciated' to demonstrate a wider range of vocabulary.

There are grammatical errors in the response. 'People lost motivation when their work is not a company' should be 'People lose motivation when their work is in a company'. Pay attention to verb tense and the use of prepositions. Practice constructing more complex sentences to showcase a wider range of grammatical structures.