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Band 5+: Can exercise help people improve concentration?

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I consider that exercise cannot improve our concentration because it's a talent that God gives us, and there are many reasons for this. One of them is that some people's psychological condition is not very good, so they cannot focus on anything. But in some people, it is very good, and they can concentrate on anything. It is a talent that exists from the moment we are born. It's not a talent that we improve day by day. It is a special talent.

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I consider that making exercise cannot improve our concentration because it’s a talent which God gives us and it has a lot of reason. One of them is that some people’s psychology condition is not very well, so they cannot focus on anything. But in some people it is very well and they can concentrate on anything. And it is a talent. It exists when we were born. It’s not a talent which we improve day by day. It is a special talent.

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The response is off-topic. It does not address the question of whether exercise can improve concentration. Instead, it focuses on an unsupported claim that concentration is an innate talent. Consider directly addressing the prompt and providing evidence or examples to support your claims.

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Vocabulary is adequate but lacks precision. Words like "psychology condition" could be replaced with more precise terms like "mental state" or "cognitive function." The repeated use of "talent" to describe concentration limits the range of vocabulary.

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