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Band 5+: can you suggest why many students decide to study law at a university.

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I think a lot of students decide to study law because in my country, Indonesia, the law is not very good for our students. Many students want to study law to prevent this bad law and restore a new law. For instance, my friend is studying law at the University of Indonesia, and I asked her why she chose to study law. She answered that she wants to be in government where she can create new laws that are good for everyone.

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I think there are a lot of students decided to study law is because in my country Indonesia to law is not very good for our students or maybe a lot of students trying to study law I want to prevent this bad law and want to restore the new law and yeah um for instance my friends she is from the law in university Indonesia and I ask her why why does she choose to study law and she answered that she is more likely to wants to be in a government where they can where she can make a new law that is good for everyone

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

students: 3

study: 3

indonesia: 2

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Pronunciation

5.5

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Task Response

The answer is relevant to the question and provides a reason why students choose to study law. However, the response is quite specific to the student's personal experience and context in Indonesia. To improve, consider broadening the scope to include more general reasons why students globally might choose to study law, such as career prospects, intellectual stimulation, or a desire for social justice. Try to avoid overly personal anecdotes and focus on more general observations.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is understandable, but there are some hesitations and repetitions ("um", "why why"). Improving fluency would involve smoother transitions and a more confident delivery. The structure is a bit disorganized; a clearer introduction and conclusion would help.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but not particularly sophisticated. More precise and varied vocabulary would enhance the response. Words like "restore" could be replaced with more specific terms, depending on the intended meaning. Consider using synonyms to avoid repetition.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are grammatical errors, such as subject-verb agreement ("a lot of students decided") and incorrect phrasing ("to law is not very good"). While the meaning is generally clear, improving grammatical accuracy is crucial for a higher score. Focus on sentence structure and correct tense usage.

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