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Band 6+: Can you tell me the western music's inpact on the world music?

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Well, first and foremost, Western music has influenced global music in many ways. For example, pop and rock have become super popular, which leads to local versions of these genres by many musicians. Now, it is Western instruments like the guitar and piano that are used instead of traditional ones. However, on the flip side, it also causes younger generations to forget their musical roots.

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Well, first and foremost, Western music has influenced global music in many ways. For example, pop and rock have become super popular, which leads to local versions of previous besides the many musicians. Now, it is a Western instrument like guitar and piano instead of traditional one. However, on the flip side, it also causes people to forget their musical roots when younger generations.

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The answer is well-organized and coherent, demonstrating a good understanding of the topic. Consider expanding on the examples provided and exploring the cultural exchange and fusion that often results from musical influences. A more balanced perspective, acknowledging both positive and negative aspects, is already present, but could be further developed.

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The answer is coherent and well-organized. Minor repetition and a slightly unclear phrasing ("local versions of previous besides the many musicians") detract from the fluency. Consider rephrasing this section for better clarity and flow.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate and mostly precise. Words like "super popular" are a bit informal for an IELTS exam. Consider using more sophisticated vocabulary, such as "extremely popular" or "widely enjoyed." The range of vocabulary could be expanded.

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There are some grammatical inaccuracies. The sentence "Now, it is a Western instrument like guitar and piano instead of traditional one" is grammatically incorrect. It should be something like "Now, Western instruments like the guitar and piano are used instead of traditional ones." The overall grammatical range is limited. Try to incorporate more complex sentence structures to improve your score.

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