Well, I’m gonna talk about my dad’s life and his character. First of all, dad was born without seeing his father, which meant that he had some difficulties in working and support, since the father can support his sons and daughters in the physical needs and kinds of these things. Anyway, he worked with his uncles from his mother’s side. They taught him how to cut the rock, but that work was so difficult and heavy because he was young and couldn’t do this work easily. His function was to put small rocks on the machine that shred the rock into small pieces. It was so simple, but it wounded his hands each time he did this. And when he came to his uncles and told them that, they mocked him and sent a p on them and they will be healed. That was so my father’s character became strong and cruel because his environment was so cruel and difficult. Add to this his personality, his natural personality is a military, which means you have to execute the order and never object. This is how his treatment is with
Band 6+: Dad'life and his character
Skyrocket your IELTS band score by 1-2 points in under a month with our premium plan!
Note: Both the topic and the answer were submitted by one of our users.
70%
Accuracy
The overall pronunciation accuracy of your speech, reflecting how well a native speaker can comprehend it.
Polished transcript:
Male
Female
Well, I'm going to talk about my dad's life and his character. First of all, Dad was born without seeing his father, which meant that he had some difficulties in working and support, since a father can support his sons and daughters in their physical needs and other aspects. Anyway, he worked with his uncles on his mother's side. They taught him how to cut rock, but that work was so difficult and heavy because he was young and couldn't do it easily. His role was to put small rocks into the machine that shredded the rock into small pieces. It was simple, but it wounded his hands each time he did this. When he went to his uncles and told them about it, they mocked him and said to just put some salt on them and they would heal. This is how my father's character became strong and tough because his environment was so harsh and difficult. Additionally, his natural personality is military, which means you have to follow orders and never object. This is how he treated others.
Actual audio transcript (What native speakers are likely to hear):
Tips: Click on each word to see feedback.
Speaking Time: 72 seconds