Band 7: Describe a bussinessman you admire (User-Submitted IELTS Speaking Answer)

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Well, there are many successful businessmen in the world, such as Elon Musk, Bill Gates, and so on. But here I would like to talk about Steve Jobs, who inspired me the most. He is the co-founder of Apple and was one of the most creative and visionary businessmen in the world, I think. I first came to know about him when I started using Apple products and saw a documentary about his life. He really inspired me with his passion and innovative thinking. Steve Jobs co-founded Apple in 1976 in his garage at a time when computers were very large and complicated, but he had the great vision to make technology simple and accessible to everyone. Because of his efforts, Apple created revolutionary products like the iPhone, iPad, iPod, and other types of Apple products. He believed that design and functionality should go hand in hand. His ideas changed the world of technology and made Apple one of the most reliable companies in the world. What I admire the most about Steve Jobs is that he never gave up. Even after he was removed from his own company, he came back later and took Apple to new heights. His resilience and belief in innovation truly motivated me. So I think Steve Jobs is one of the most admirable businessmen in the world, mainly because of the way he changed the world through creativity, technology, and leadership.

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Well, there are many successful businessmen in the world such as Elon Musk, Bill Gates and so on. But here I would like to talk about Steve Jobs who admired me the most. He is co-founder of Apple, he was one of the most creative and visionary businessmen in the world, I think. I first came to know about him when I started using Apple products and I saw a documentary about his life. He really inspired me with his passion and innovative thinking. Steve Jobs co-founded Apple in 1966 in his garage at the time computers were very large and complicated, but he had great vision to make technology simple and accessible to everyone. Because of his efforts, Apple created revolutionary products like iPhone, Apple, iPod and other types of Apple products. He believed that design and functionality should go hand in hand. His ideas changed the world of technology and made Apple one of the most reliable companies in the world. What admired the most from Steve Jobs? He never gave up. Even after he was removed from his own company, he came back later and took Apple to new heights. His resilience and belief in innovation truly motivated me. So I think Steve Jobs is one of the most admirable businessmen in the world, mainly because of the way he changed the world through creativity, technology and leadership. So I think Steve Jobs.

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