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Band 6+: Describe a creative person whose work you admire. You should say: - Who this person is - What type of work they do - How you became aware of their work And explain why you admire their work.

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Actually, the creative person that I admire is my sister. She is my little sister, and she plays a role in my company. She does marketing in my company, and she is very patient with my work. She has a lot of knowledge and experience about the company's operations and marketing. Moreover, she is my sister, and I discovered her talent in this work when she finished university. I saw her potential and quickly employed her in my company for marketing. I admire her work because she does a lot for me, and the only thing on her mind is to improve my work.

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Actually the person, the creative person that I admire his work is my sister. My sister, she is my little sister and she is playing a role in my company. she is do a marketing in my company and she is very patient about my work and she has a lot of knowledge and experience about the company’s things and marketing. Moreover, she is my sister and I found out her power in this work when she finished here University I see things in here and I quickly employ here in my company for marketing genre I admire her work because she do a lot for me and and only thing in her mind is to improve my work.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

work: 4

sister: 3

company: 3

marketing: 3

admire: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

Task Response

The response addresses the topic and provides some relevant information about the speaker's sister. However, the answer could be improved by providing more specific details about the sister's creative work and examples of her creativity. The explanation of why the speaker admires her work is somewhat general and could benefit from more elaboration. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is generally understandable, but there are noticeable hesitations and repetitions ('My sister, she is my little sister'). The organization is present but could be improved with more cohesive devices to link ideas smoothly. Try to avoid unnecessary repetition and use linking words to connect your ideas more effectively.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, but it lacks precision and variety. The language used is quite basic. To improve, try to incorporate more specific and descriptive words related to marketing and creativity. For example, instead of 'company's things,' you could say 'company's strategies' or 'business operations.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical errors throughout the response ('she is do a marketing,' 'finished here University,' 'employ here'). The range of grammatical structures is limited. Focus on using correct verb tenses, articles, and prepositions. Practice using a wider range of sentence structures to express your ideas more accurately.

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Band 6+: Describe a creative person whose work you admire. You should say: - Who this person is - What type of work they do - How you became aware of their work And explain why you admire their work.

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