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Band 6+: Describe a family member you like to work with in future

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So actually, it's my mom. I really want to work with her, and I think she will be a good partner for me. To be honest, I want to work with my mom in cooking because she's very talented and makes incredibly delicious food. She makes everything really tasty. You really have to try my mom's handmade items, such as food, cookies, and some drinks. Maybe she has a magic touch because if she prepares something, it will be exactly very yummy. If I work with her, our work will be successful for sure.

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So actually it’s my mom. I really want to work with her and I think she will be a good partner for me and to be honest I want to work with my mom at cooking because she’s very talented at cooking and makes incredibly delicious food and actually she makes everything really delicious and tasty. You really have to try my mom’s handmade things such as food, cookie and some kind of drinks maybe she has a magic hand that if she prepares something it will be exactly very yummy and and if I work with her our work will be successful exactly.

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Vocabulary Repetition:

work: 4

really: 3

with: 3

will: 3

because: 2

makes: 2

Try using synonyms for the above words

Pronunciation

6.5

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

Task Response

4.5

The response is a good start, but it could be improved by providing more specific details about the work environment, the nature of the collaboration, and the potential challenges and how you would overcome them. Elaborating on your mom's skills and experience, and how your skills complement hers, would strengthen the response. Consider adding examples of successful collaborations you've already had with your mom, even outside of a professional context. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

Fluency & Coherence

The response is coherent and easy to follow. However, there's some repetition and hesitation, indicated by the use of 'and' multiple times and the repetition of 'delicious' and 'yummy'. Improving fluency would involve more concise phrasing and a smoother flow of ideas. Consider pausing briefly to structure your thoughts before speaking.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate, but lacks sophistication. Words like 'incredibly delicious' and 'very yummy' are somewhat simplistic. Using more precise and varied vocabulary would enhance the response. For example, instead of 'very yummy,' you could describe specific flavors or textures. Consider using more descriptive adjectives and adverbs.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammar is mostly accurate, but there are some minor errors and repetitive sentence structures. The sentence 'You really have to try my mom's handmade things such as food, cookie and some kind of drinks' could be improved by using parallel structure ('food, cookies, and drinks'). While the message is clear, focusing on more complex sentence structures and varied grammatical forms would improve the score.

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