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Band 5+: Describe a family member you like to work with in future

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So it's actually my mom because she is really talented at everything. I want to work with her on cooking skills because she makes everything really delicious. You really have to try my mom's handmade things, such as food, cookies, and some kinds of drinks. Maybe she has a magic touch that makes whatever she prepares exactly yummy. I think she will be the best partner for me because I can't find anybody like her, with her talent. So if I work with her, our work will definitely be successful.

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So it’s actually my mom because she is really talented at everything and I don’t want to work with her at cooking skill and because she is really talented and she makes everything really delicious and you really have to try my mom’s handmade things such as food, cookie and some kind of drinks. Maybe she has a magic hand that if you prepare something it will be exactly very yummy and I think she will be the best partner for me because I think that I can’t find anybody anybody like her like her talented so if I work with her our work will be exactly successful

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Overall Band Score

5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

because: 3

really: 3

work: 3

with: 3

everything: 2

makes: 2

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Pronunciation

6.5

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

Task Response

The response is a good start, but it could be improved by providing more specific details about a potential work scenario with your mother. Elaborate on the type of business or project you envision, and explain how your skills complement hers. Adding details about your mother's experience and expertise would also strengthen the response. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

Fluency & Coherence

5.5

The response is coherent, but the fluency could be improved. There's some repetition ("like her like her") and self-correction, which impacts the overall flow. Practice speaking more smoothly and confidently to eliminate these issues.

Lexical Resource

5.5

The vocabulary is adequate, but could be more precise and varied. Phrases like "really talented at everything" and "really delicious" are a bit simplistic. Try using more descriptive and specific vocabulary to showcase a wider range.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4.5

There are some grammatical errors, such as the incorrect use of "at" in "talented at everything" and the repetition in the phrase "anybody anybody." While the overall message is understandable, improving grammatical accuracy will significantly enhance the score. Focus on sentence structure and correct article usage.

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