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Band 6+: Describe a leader you admire. You should say: Who this person is; How you know this person; What skills he or she has for leadership And explain why you think he or she is a good leader.

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In my school life, a person I admire for her leadership qualities was my senior. She has numerous qualities such as communication skills, vision, empathy, and the ability to motivate. I observed her speech in our school parliament election, which was held on 22nd March 2022. In my troubled times, I remember her boldness. Her speech was compelling, and I admire her for it. To tell you the truth, communication skills can help build new relationships. A good vision can facilitate communication with others. She is one of the best leaders I have seen.

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In my school life, a person I admire for their leadership qualities, she was my senior. She has numerous qualities such as communication skills, vision, empathy and motivating. I observed her speech in our school parliament election. It is held on 22nd March 2022. In my troubled time, I remember her boldness. Her speech was more compelling. I admire for her speech. To tell you the truth, communication skills can make a new relationship. Good vision can help to communication with others. She is one of the good leaders when I saw.

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school: 2

admire: 2

qualities: 2

skills: 2

vision: 2

speech: 2

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Task Response

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The answer is quite brief and lacks specific details and personal experiences. Consider expanding on the examples provided, such as the specific content of the speech or a more detailed account of how she demonstrated empathy and motivation. Adding more personal anecdotes will strengthen the response. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is coherent, but the fluency could be improved. There are a few instances of repetition and slightly hesitant phrasing. Try to speak more smoothly and confidently, connecting your ideas more seamlessly. For example, instead of 'I admire for her speech,' try 'I admire her speech' or 'I admire her for her powerful speech.'

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate, but could be more precise and sophisticated. While words like 'communication skills,' 'vision,' and 'empathy' are relevant, using more specific examples to illustrate these qualities would enhance the response. For instance, instead of just saying 'good vision,' describe the vision she had and how it impacted others. Consider using stronger verbs and more descriptive adjectives.

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The grammar is mostly correct, but there are a few minor errors. For example, 'I admire for her speech' is grammatically incorrect. Also, the sentence structure could be more varied. Practice using more complex sentence structures, such as those with subordinate clauses, to demonstrate a wider grammatical range. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement and correct article usage.

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Band 6+: Describe a leader you admire. You should say: Who this person is; How you know this person; What skills he or she has for leadership And explain why you think he or she is a good leader.

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