Band 6+: Describe a long-term goal you would like to achieve

I would like to describe a long-term goal that I have had since my childhood, and it's to become a doctor. Well, I know this is a hard path, but for me, becoming a doctor is not only a goal but also an understanding that I will have someone's life in my hands. And whether it will be really hard or a really long path, the main purpose is to help the people around me and also at the same time to be kind always. For that, I think firstly, as an IB student, I will try to get high grades in my biology as well as chemistry, and with that also, I will try to improve my English and also maybe Italian because what I really want to do is study abroad, mainly in Italy, in Rome. And for that, I'm trying to somehow learn Italian as well. After that, I will try to apply to an Italian university named Sapienza, and there for three years of course I will learn about some medical things and subjects. After that, I will try to also work and have some experience because as you know, in medicine, the main thing is to be experienced and also be very conscious in your work. If you would ask why I set this goal, the main thing would be maybe my parents and also my choice. Because I think this is a really hard choice, of course, in teenage life, not only for me but for all teenagers. It's really hard to choose what you will be in the future. But what really motivated me, as I said, is that doctor is not only a job, but it's also at the same time someone's life in your hands. And you put all your work into that to be the best and to be more clever day by day. And you learn not only in your university time but also till the end of your working day.