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Band 5+: Describe a person who helps to protect the environment You should say: Who this person is When this person does this What has the person done And explain why you think this person does this

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I think protecting the environment is our duty. I'm going to talk about my literature teacher in school. My teacher does important tasks for the environment every day, every year. She wants to maintain our environment's safety and keep it for future life. Even her pupils and children help with this difficult and critical task. She grows several plants every year and cleans the yard of the school. I admire my teacher for this arduous task.

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I think protecting the environment is our duty. And I’m going to talk about my literature teacher in school. My teacher do important tasks for environment every day, every year. She wants to maintain our environment safety and keep it for future life. Even her pupils and children helps for this difficult and critical task. She grows several plants every year and clean yard of school. Then through letters and beats. And I admire my teacher for this arduous task.

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Overall Band Score

5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

teacher: 3

every: 3

environment: 2

school: 2

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Pronunciation

6.5

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

Task Response

The response is a good start, fulfilling the task requirements. However, to improve, add more specific details about the teacher's actions and their impact. Elaborate on the types of plants grown, the scale of the cleaning efforts, and the involvement of students. Explain more about the teacher's motivation, providing concrete examples to support the claim of environmental protection. Adding personal anecdotes or observations would enhance the response. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

Fluency & Coherence

5.5

The answer is somewhat coherent, but the structure could be improved. There's a slight lack of fluency; some sentences are awkwardly phrased. Adding more transitional words and phrases would enhance the flow. For example, instead of simply listing actions, you could use phrases like 'In addition to...', 'Furthermore...', or 'Moreover...' to connect ideas more smoothly. The response is understandable, but lacks the sophisticated flow of a band 7 or higher.

Lexical Resource

5.5

The vocabulary is adequate but not particularly rich or precise. Words like 'important tasks' and 'environment safety' are a bit generic. Using more specific and vivid vocabulary would improve the score. For example, instead of 'important tasks,' you could describe specific actions like 'organizes school-wide recycling programs' or 'leads environmental awareness campaigns.' The word 'arduous' is well-chosen, showing a good range.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4.5

There are several grammatical errors, particularly in sentence structure and verb tense consistency. For example, 'My teacher do important tasks' should be 'My teacher does important tasks.' The sentence 'Then through letters and beats' is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Improving grammatical accuracy and using a wider range of grammatical structures (e.g., passive voice, complex sentences) would significantly enhance the score. While the message is mostly clear, the grammatical errors detract from the overall quality.

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