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Band 4+: Describe a person you know who is very good at making others feel comfortable. You should say: - Who this person is - How you know them - What they do to make people feel at ease And explain why you admire this quality in them.

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I would like to talk about a person I know who is very good at making people feel comfortable, and this person's name is Zohra Tan. I met her through a mutual friend who introduced me to her on Telegram. Our meeting was sudden, and I was quite shocked. She is really kind, especially. All I want is honesty. What I admire is her honesty, truthfulness, helpfulness, and her beautiful personality. She makes people feel at ease effortlessly.

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I would say about a person I know who is making people feel comfortable and this person’s name is Zohra Tan. And this brother really liked me. And they introduced me to the telegram. And our meeting is suddenly, and I’m very shocked. And… He is really like me, especially. All I want is honesty. What I love is… a himchonesty, truthful, helpful, and very beautiful people. And they do to make people feel helpful easily.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

people: 2

honesty: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

Task Response

The response addresses the topic but lacks the necessary depth and development required for a higher score. While the speaker identifies the person and how they met, the response fails to provide specific details regarding 'what they do to make people feel at ease.' The explanation for why the speaker admires this quality is somewhat generic and does not directly link the person's honesty or helpfulness to the specific ability to make others feel comfortable. To improve, try to include specific anecdotes or examples of situations where this person demonstrated these qualities. Expanding on the 'how' and 'why' with descriptive language and personal stories will help in meeting the requirements of the prompt more fully. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

Fluency & Coherence

The response is very short and lacks the development required for a Part 2 long turn (which should last 1-2 minutes). There is significant hesitation and fragmentation in the raw answer. To improve, you need to use cohesive devices (e.g., 'Furthermore', 'As a result', 'Moving on to...') to link your ideas and ensure you address all bullet points in the prompt in detail.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is very limited and repetitive. There are several instances of word formation errors (e.g., 'himchonesty'). While you attempted to use descriptive words like 'honesty' and 'truthful', they were not used in a way that demonstrated range. Aim to use more idiomatic expressions related to personality, such as 'approachable,' 'empathetic,' or 'has a calming presence.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are frequent grammatical errors that impede communication. Issues include subject-verb agreement, incorrect pronoun usage (switching between 'he', 'they', and 'she'), and improper tense usage (e.g., 'our meeting is suddenly'). You should practice using a variety of tenses, particularly the past simple for storytelling and the present simple for describing personality traits.

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Band 4+: Describe a person you know who is very good at making others feel comfortable. You should say: - Who this person is - How you know them - What they do to make people feel at ease And explain why you admire this quality in them.

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