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Band 5+: describe a person you love

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One person I see always, on the other hand, you see, um, very she always takes care of members in my family. And um, I, and I saw that, and I thought she works very hard to earn enough money for me to study. And she motivates, she's my motivation in my life. That made me afford, uh, that made me afford to study and do anything I want to. I have high goals, motivation, motivate to, I want to try hard, try hard, I try hard, and I try hard, and I try hard in my studies. And um, achieve, and try hard easily, and afford to achieve high goals to make me, to make me happy, make her, make her, to make her happy. And um, and when, and when I'm tired or I want to bog down, give up, and when, when I'm tired, and when I'm tired and I want to give up anything, she will give me, she will, she will motivate me, and um, help me do them.

Actual audio transcript (What native speakers are likely to hear):

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Vocabulary Repetition:

hard: 7

make: 5

when: 5

want: 4

that: 3

afford: 3

tired: 3

give: 3

will: 3

always: 2

study: 2

motivation: 2

anything: 2

goals: 2

motivate: 2

achieve: 2

happy: 2

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Pronunciation

5.5

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

Task Response

You provided a good description of the person you love, but you could have included more specific details about their personality and how they make you feel. For example, you could have mentioned some of their hobbies or interests, or shared a specific memory that illustrates your love for them. You also repeated the word "try hard" several times, which made your answer sound repetitive. Try to use a wider range of vocabulary to express your ideas.

Fluency & Coherence

Your answer was a bit disjointed and difficult to follow at times. You used a lot of fillers like "um" and "and" which made your speech sound hesitant. Try to pause more naturally and use connecting words like "because", "so", and "although" to make your answer more coherent.

Lexical Resource

4.5

You used some good vocabulary, but you could have used a wider range of words to express your ideas more precisely. For example, instead of saying "she motivates me", you could have said "she inspires me" or "she encourages me". You also repeated the phrase "try hard" several times, which made your answer sound repetitive. Try to use a wider range of vocabulary to express your ideas. Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

You made some grammatical errors, such as using the wrong tense or using incorrect articles. For example, you said "she always take care" instead of "she always takes care". You also used the phrase "make her to make her happy" which is grammatically incorrect. Try to pay more attention to your grammar and use a wider range of grammatical structures.

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