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Band 6+: describe a role model

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The first person that comes to mind is LA from Blackpink, and I've known her since she was about eighteen years old. She was popular even back then, being the only Thai member in her group. She also trained for six years before she even debuted. I think she would be a good role model because she was so passionate and persistent with her dream and her job. I had the chance to go to a Blackpink concert in Singapore, and I got to see her perform in person. She really showed her ambition on stage, which I think is quite influential for young people. It encourages them to follow their dreams and shows them the importance of perseverance and resilience. She never gave up, even when things were tough. She inspires so many people. I've known her for six years now, and I've always admired her dedication and hard work.

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The first person that comes to Mygo is LA from blacking and I know her since she was Deb eight years ago. She was popular since she was a only Timeai member in her group. Additionally, she was training for six year before she. Before she got a chance to deb boot. Well, I think she would be a good role model because she was passionate andistence with her dream and job. Well I. I have got a chance to go to concert of Laing in Singapore. So I did get a chance to look at her in person and she showed her ambitions on stage which I guess is quite influence for young people and to follow their dream and show her persance and resilience. Because she never gave up. Because she never gave up. She give up black bo very people. So I know hers in since via for six years.

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Vocabulary Repetition:

i've: 3

years: 3

even: 3

person: 2

blackpink: 2

known: 2

think: 2

people: 2

Try using synonyms for the above words

Pronunciation

5.5

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

Task Response

You provided a good description of your role model, LA from Blackpink, and you gave specific examples of her qualities, such as her passion, persistence, and resilience. You also mentioned your personal experience of seeing her perform, which adds a personal touch. However, you could have elaborated more on the impact she has had on you personally. For example, how has her story inspired you to pursue your own dreams or overcome challenges?

Fluency & Coherence

Your speech is generally fluent, but there are some instances of repetition and self-correction, such as "Because she never gave up. Because she never gave up." You could improve your coherence by using more transition words and phrases to connect your ideas, such as "Furthermore," "In addition," or "For example."

Lexical Resource

6.5

You use a good range of vocabulary, including words like "passionate," "persistent," "ambition," and "influential." However, you could use more precise and sophisticated vocabulary to express your ideas more effectively. For example, instead of saying "she showed her ambition on stage," you could say "she exuded an aura of ambition on stage." Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

You demonstrate a good grasp of grammar, but there are some minor errors, such as "she was a only Timeai member" and "she give up black bo very people." You should pay attention to subject-verb agreement and article usage. You could also use more complex sentence structures to add variety and sophistication to your speech.

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