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Band 7+: Describe a sportsperson that you admire

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The athlete that I've chosen to describe is an eminent Iranian tennis player called Mansur Bahrami, who is 50 years old now, and he has played tennis since he was 20 years old. Despite his age, he is still very talented and skilled at playing tennis, winning plenty of matches and competitions. He has a collection of different medals, including silver and gold medals, and mostly he has donated his medals to underprivileged people. I really enjoy watching his competitions as I used to play tennis back then. I learned some tips and tricks from him. I like the way he moves quickly, chasing the ball, and he seems very confident and professional. One thing that impressed me the most about him is the fact that he has done a lot of charity work, helping poor people and providing them with ample resources to continue their education. He is a parent in contrast to material possessions.
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The athlete that I’ve chosen to describe is an eminent Iranian tennis player called Mansur Bahrami, who is 50 years old now, and he has played tennis since he was 20 years old. Despite his age, he is still very talented and good at playing tennis, winning plenty of matches and competitions. He has a collection of different medals, silver medals, gold medals, and mostly he has donated his medals to underprivileged people. I really enjoy watching his competitions as I used to play tennis back then. I learned some tips and tricks from him. I like the way he moves very quickly, chasing the ball, and he seems very confident and professional. One thing that impressed me the most about him is the fact that he has done a lot of charity work, helping poor people and providing them with ample money to continue their education. He is a parent in difference to material possession.

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Overall Band Score

7
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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:
tennis: 4
that: 3
medals: 3
years: 2
competitions: 2
people: 2
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Pronunciation

7
Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

Task Response

7
The answer is well-organized and coherent, providing a good description of the chosen sportsperson. Consider adding more specific details about his playing style, memorable matches, or the impact of his charity work for a more comprehensive response.

Fluency & Coherence

8
The description is coherent and well-structured. The speaker's fluency is good, with only minor hesitations. The occasional minor repetition doesn't detract significantly from the overall flow. Consider using more sophisticated linking words to enhance the coherence further (e.g., 'Furthermore,' 'Moreover,' 'In addition').

Lexical Resource

7
The vocabulary is adequate and mostly accurate. Words like "eminent" and "underprivileged" show a good range. However, some vocabulary choices could be more precise. For example, instead of 'plenty of matches,' you could use 'a significant number of matches' or 'numerous victories.' The phrase 'parent in difference to material possession' needs rephrasing for clarity. Perhaps 'He prioritizes people over material possessions' or 'He values people more than material wealth' would be better.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

7
Grammar is mostly accurate, with only a few minor errors. The sentence 'He is a parent in difference to material possession' is grammatically incorrect and needs correction. While the range of grammatical structures is sufficient, using more complex sentence structures would improve the score. For example, instead of two short sentences, combine them into one more complex sentence to demonstrate a wider range of grammatical structures.

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