Band 5+: describe an ambition that you haven't achieved

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

The answer is partially on topic, but it lacks sufficient detail and coherence. Consider expanding on the reasons behind your change of heart and what you are doing now to pursue alternative ambitions. Adding specific examples of your parents' work and your current plans would strengthen the response. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

The answer is understandable, but the fluency could be improved. There are some repetitions and slightly hesitant phrasing. Consider pausing briefly to structure your thoughts before speaking, and try to avoid repeating phrases like "I want to become a doctor." A more concise and organized structure would enhance the fluency.

The vocabulary is adequate but lacks precision in places. Words like "busy" and "problems" are a bit general. More specific vocabulary would strengthen the answer. For example, instead of "busy," you could use words like "overwhelmed" or "under pressure." Instead of "problems," you could use more descriptive terms related to patient care. Using more sophisticated vocabulary will improve your score.

There are several grammatical errors, particularly in sentence structure and article usage. For example, "I have a ambition" should be "I had an ambition." The sentence "and they need to handle the pain patients are problem every time" is grammatically incorrect and unclear. Improving grammatical accuracy and using a wider range of grammatical structures will significantly improve your score. Focus on subject-verb agreement and correct article usage.